List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question, using correct grammar, and avoiding redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember important items. Moreover, it ensures that I stay within my budget and avoid unnecessary purchases.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to explain your reasons. Also, avoid fragmented sentences and ensure your answer is coherent.

例: No, I usually don't make a work list because it stresses me out when I can't complete all tasks. Therefore, I prefer to manage my work without a list as it suits me better.

提案: Your answer has repetition and grammatical errors. Try to structure your response clearly with proper linking words and avoid repeating phrases. Also, explain your points with specific reasons.

例: Some people dislike making lists because it can be stressful if tasks remain unfinished. Instead, they prefer to prioritise their work mentally to reduce pressure.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains some unclear words and grammatical mistakes. Try to use correct vocabulary and link your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition and be concise.

例: I usually prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient. Since I always carry my phone, I can easily access and update my lists anytime and anywhere.

× Yes, I do believe. Make a list because I never want to forget some important things which is in my list.

✓ Yes, I do believe. I make a list because I never want to forget some important things which are in my list.

The pronoun 'which' refers to 'some important things' which is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, the sentence lacks the subject 'I' before 'make a list'.

× So this this wasn't very necessary and it's helped me to under my bed shopping under my budget.

✓ So this wasn't very necessary and it has helped me to keep my shopping under my budget.

The phrase 'under my bed shopping' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'keep my shopping under my budget'. Also, 'it's helped' should be 'it has helped' for clarity.

× No, usually I don't make any list of my work because it is very stressful if I can't finish any work that reminds me that feels bad for me.

✓ No, usually I don't make any list of my work because it is very stressful if I can't finish any work; that reminds me and makes me feel bad.

The sentence structure is confusing. 'That reminds me that feels bad for me' is incorrect. It should be 'that reminds me and makes me feel bad' to correctly express the idea.

× So the main reason is. I am not making work list and it's not work for me.

✓ So the main reason is, I am not making a work list and it doesn't work for me.

The phrase 'making work list' needs an article 'a' before 'work list'. Also, 'it's not work for me' should be 'it doesn't work for me' to be grammatically correct.

× Many people don't like to make a list becaused. It is very it is very stressful for them and if any task which is uncompleted, it's filled bad.

✓ Many people don't like to make a list because it is very stressful for them, and if any task is uncompleted, it feels bad.

The word 'becaused' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. Also, 'it's filled bad' should be 'it feels bad'. The sentence needs proper conjunctions and verb forms.

× And instead of. Instead of it, they prefer to prioritize.

✓ Instead of that, they prefer to prioritize.

The phrase 'And instead of. Instead of it,' is redundant and incorrect. It should be 'Instead of that' to connect the ideas properly.

× I usually prefer to make a list on my phone. Kisses becauses phone is very convenient for me.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because the phone is very convenient for me.

'Kisses becauses' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. Also, 'phone' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific object.

× I can take well whenever I go, phone is always in my pocket.

✓ I can take it well whenever I go; the phone is always in my pocket.

The phrase 'take well' is unclear; it should be 'take it well' or 'take it with me'. Also, 'phone' needs the definite article 'the'.

× So phone is better alternative for me to store. And write down list of my work.

✓ So the phone is a better alternative for me to store and write down my work list.

The sentence is fragmented. 'And write down list of my work' should be connected to the previous sentence. Also, 'phone' needs 'the' and 'a' before 'better alternative'.