List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh dùng từ không chính xác và lặp lại từ không cần thiết. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic giữa các ý.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember important items. This way, I don't forget anything I need to buy.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ ràng hơn về việc làm danh sách có hiệu quả hay không.

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work as a student, especially when preparing for presentations. It helps me stay organized and complete tasks on time.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu do lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc, tránh dùng từ không chính xác.

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because it takes a lot of time. They prefer to spend their time doing other things instead.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ ràng về sự thay đổi sở thích của bạn.

例: I used to prefer making lists on paper, but now I find it more convenient to use my phone because I can easily edit and access my lists anywhere.

× Yes, I know I usually make a list when I go shopping so it can notice me some important items that I need to buy an.

✓ Yes, I know I usually make a list when I go shopping so it can remind me of some important items that I need to buy.

The phrase 'notice me' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'remind' followed by 'me of' to indicate recalling important items. Also, 'an' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× Uh, because, uh, that reason I cannot forgot anything that I want to buy.

✓ Uh, because of that reason, I cannot forget anything that I want to buy.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense, but the sentence requires the base form 'forget' after 'cannot'. Also, 'because of that reason' is the correct phrase.

× Yes, I hate is.

✓ Yes, I hate it.

The pronoun 'is' is incorrect here; the correct object pronoun is 'it' to refer to making lists.

× Ann usually make a list for my work as a student, especially preparing for my presentation.

✓ I usually make a list for my work as a student, especially when preparing for my presentation.

The subject 'I' requires the verb 'make' in singular form, and 'Ann' seems to be a mishearing or typo; it should be 'I'. Also, adding 'when' improves sentence clarity.

× In my opinion, many people don't like making list because it take Nam a lot of time.

✓ In my opinion, many people don't like making lists because it takes them a lot of time.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match 'many people'. The verb 'take' should be 'takes' to agree with singular 'it' (referring to making lists). 'Nam' is likely a mishearing of 'them'.

× And they now want to spend time making list however and he not making less will offer us people alot up change to do better in there.

✓ And they do not want to spend time making lists; however, not making lists will offer us people a lot of chances to do better there.

Pronouns and verbs are incorrect: 'now' should be 'do not', 'list' should be plural 'lists', 'he' should be 'not', 'less' should be 'lists', 'alot up change' should be 'a lot of chances'. The sentence structure is also corrected for clarity.

× Definitely. Thank you. I prefer. Making list on paper in the past.

✓ Definitely, thank you. I preferred making lists on paper in the past.

The verb tense should be past 'preferred' to match 'in the past'. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists'.

× However, we leave in our changing tab form an hour convenient an we can use it for convenient way and. Copy exactly.

✓ However, we live in a changing time, so it is convenient and we can use it in a convenient way and copy exactly.

'Leave' should be 'live', 'tab form an hour' is incorrect and corrected to 'changing time', 'an' is corrected to 'a', and sentence structure is improved for clarity.