List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn, ví dụ như "I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember important items." Ngoài ra, tránh các câu bị ngắt quãng và sử dụng từ phù hợp hơn.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember important items that I might forget otherwise.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi phát âm hoặc từ không đúng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ ràng hơn về việc bạn làm danh sách cho công việc học tập của mình. Hãy tránh các từ không rõ nghĩa và câu bị ngắt quãng.

例: Yes, I make lists for my work as a student, especially when preparing presentations at school. Making lists helps me organize my tasks and prepare thoroughly.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời trở nên mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ đúng ngữ cảnh. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói "Some people don't like making lists because it can be time-consuming and tedious." Đồng thời, hãy cung cấp ví dụ rõ ràng và liên kết ý tưởng bằng từ nối.

例: Some people don't like making lists because it can be time-consuming and feel tedious. For example, my friend spends too much time organizing his list instead of doing the actual tasks. However, I personally find making lists very helpful.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ không đúng, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, ví dụ như "I used to prefer making lists on paper, but now I find it more convenient to use my phone." Hãy tránh các từ không chính xác và câu bị ngắt quãng.

例: I used to prefer making lists on paper, but nowadays I find it more convenient to use my phone because I always have it with me and can easily add or check items.

× I usually make a list when I go shopping because it can notice me some. Important items that I. Cannot forget.

✓ I usually make a list when I go shopping because it can remind me of some important items that I cannot forget.

The phrase 'notice me some' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'remind' to indicate helping to remember. Also, 'some. Important items' should be 'some important items' without a period. The sentence also incorrectly splits 'I. Cannot forget' which should be 'I cannot forget' as one sentence.

× my work as a student, an ankh usually spend my time for my presentation at school.

✓ my work as a student, and I usually spend my time preparing my presentation at school.

The phrase 'an ankh' is a mishearing or typo for 'and I'. Also, 'spend my time for my presentation' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'spend my time preparing my presentation' to indicate the activity.

× So I need to make many lists on a toe. Prepare for the excellent. But as a base.

✓ So I need to make many lists to prepare for the excellent, but as a base.

The phrase 'on a toe' is incorrect; it should be 'to' indicating purpose. The sentence fragments 'Prepare for the excellent. But as a base.' should be combined into one coherent sentence. 'Excellent' is vague; likely meaning 'exams' or 'presentations' but kept as is for correction.

× Are definitely Some people don't climb making lists because it can be time consuming and feel like a tedious task.

✓ Definitely, some people don't like making lists because it can be time-consuming and feel like a tedious task.

The phrase 'Are definitely Some people don't climb' is incorrect. It should be 'Definitely, some people don't like'. 'Climb' is a mishearing or typo for 'like'. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'.

× For example, bottom I spend too much time organizing his list incident up during the actual.

✓ For example, sometimes I spend too much time organizing my list instead of focusing on the actual task.

'Bottom' is a mishearing for 'sometimes'. 'His list incident up' is incorrect; it should be 'my list instead of'. The sentence is corrected to make logical sense.

× Personally, I believe making list is very helpful.

✓ Personally, I believe making lists is very helpful.

'Making list' should be plural 'making lists' to indicate the general activity.

× Definitely I originally killed on paper however we live in a change time fan and now convenient and I use it everyday for taking not an make some list in my phone to remember clearly an convenient Annina convene.

✓ Definitely, I originally liked paper; however, we live in changing times and now it's convenient, so I use my phone every day for taking notes and making lists to remember clearly and conveniently.

'Killed' is a mishearing for 'liked'. 'Change time fan' should be 'changing times'. 'Taking not an make some list' should be 'taking notes and making lists'. 'Annina convene' is unclear but interpreted as 'and conveniently'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.