List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making it more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'help me uneasy'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific reasons why making a list helps you.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list for my daily needs because it helps me remember everything I require. Moreover, it makes shopping easier and faster since I can quickly find the items without forgetting anything.

提案: Your answer has some unclear expressions like 'tasks which I need to chew' and 'without fog'. Try to use clearer vocabulary and structure your answer with a topic sentence followed by supporting details. Use linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, I make a list of tasks I need to complete at work. This helps me prioritize my duties and meet deadlines efficiently. As a result, I can work systematically without forgetting important tasks.

提案: Your answer is somewhat confusing and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they have a good memory and can remember their tasks without writing them down. Therefore, they find lists unnecessary.

提案: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'add ISM them back and test it'. Try to use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words for coherence.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can access them anywhere, even if I forget my paper list at home. Additionally, digital lists are easy to edit, so I can quickly correct any mistakes.

× Yes, I do make a list of items which I need to buy for my daily purpose which helps me to not forget the things which I need so it will help me uneasy.

✓ Yes, I do make a list of items which I need to buy for my daily purpose which helps me not to forget the things I need, so it will help me easily.

The phrase 'helps me to not forget' is better expressed as 'helps me not to forget' for natural English. Also, 'help me uneasy' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'easily' to indicate the ease of the task.

× It will be easy for me to choose and search. Without leaving anything.

✓ It will be easy for me to choose and search without leaving anything.

The sentence fragment 'Without leaving anything.' should be connected to the previous sentence to form a complete sentence, improving sentence structure and clarity.

× As I do list the task which I need to chew while I was while I'm working.

✓ As I list the tasks which I need to do while I am working.

The phrase 'need to chew' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'need to do'. Also, mixing tenses 'while I was while I'm working' is confusing; it should be consistent in present tense 'while I am working'.

× So it will it can. Without fog, so it will help me to do the work without forgetting.

✓ So it can help me to do the work without forgetting.

The sentence 'So it will it can.' is incomplete and unclear. Also, 'Without fog' seems to be a typo or incorrect phrase. The corrected sentence is concise and clear.

× Most of the people who doesn't make list are kind of good, have a good memory which they will remember all of the things which we need they need to do without listing them, so it's there.

✓ Most of the people who don't make lists are kind of good; they have a good memory and will remember all the things they need to do without listing them, so it's there.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Also, 'make list' should be 'make lists' to agree in number. The sentence is long and needs punctuation for clarity.

× I would like to make list on my phone because it is easily to access wherever you want or even you can download it from cloud even while if you for get in your home.

✓ I would like to make a list on my phone because it is easy to access wherever you want, or you can even download it from the cloud if you forget it at home.

The phrase 'make list on my phone' needs the article 'a'. 'Easily to access' should be 'easy to access'. 'Download it from cloud' requires the definite article 'the'. 'If you for get in your home' is corrected to 'if you forget it at home' for clarity and correctness.

× Or if you can make and mistakes you can just add ISM them back and test it.

✓ Or if you make any mistakes, you can just add them back and fix it.

The phrase 'if you can make and mistakes' is incorrect; it should be 'if you make any mistakes'. 'Add ISM them back and test it' is unclear; likely intended 'add them back and fix it'. Pronoun usage and word choice are corrected for clarity.