List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there is a small grammatical error ('helps me is stay' should be 'helps me stay'). Also, try to use linking words like 'which' or 'so that' more effectively to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas more smoothly.

例: Yes, I usually make a list of all the items I need before shopping, categorizing them into sections such as groceries and household items. This helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying, so I can save both time and money.

提案: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'unfold from my past' and 'helps me I don't forget'. Try to use complete sentences and correct grammar. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'as a result' properly to connect ideas logically.

例: Yes, I definitely make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. For example, I use a digital app that sends me reminders, which helps me not to forget important deadlines and reduces my stress. As a result, my productivity improves, and I feel a great sense of accomplishment when I complete all my tasks on time.

提案: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but the phrase 'making this can be an extra work' is awkward. Use 'making lists can be extra work' instead. Also, try to add linking words like 'because' and 'additionally' to improve coherence and avoid minor grammatical errors.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to rely on their memory. They feel confident in their ability to remember all their tasks without writing them down. Additionally, some believe that making lists can be extra work that slows them down rather than helping them.

提案: Your answer is clear, natural, and well-structured. To improve further, you could use a linking word like 'so' to connect ideas more smoothly and avoid a long sentence by splitting it into two.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always have it with me, so it is very convenient. I can easily add or remove items whenever I need to without worrying about losing a piece of paper.

× I categorize my list into different sections such as groceries and household items which helps me is stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying so I can save both time and money.

✓ I categorize my list into different sections such as groceries and household items which helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying so I can save both time and money.

The phrase 'helps me is stay' contains an incorrect use of the verb 'is' before the base verb 'stay'. The correct form is 'helps me stay' because after 'helps me', the base form of the verb should be used without 'is'. This is a common error involving verb forms after verbs like 'help'.

× Definitely make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized, unfold from my past.

✓ I definitely make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and learn from my past.

The original sentence lacks a subject 'I' at the beginning, which is necessary for a complete sentence. Also, the phrase 'unfold from my past' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'learn from my past'. The correction adds the subject and replaces 'unfold' with 'learn' to make the sentence grammatically correct and meaningful.

× For example, I use a digital app that sends me reminders, which helps me I don't forget important deadlines and reduce my stress.

✓ For example, I use a digital app that sends me reminders, which helps me not forget important deadlines and reduce my stress.

The phrase 'helps me I don't forget' is incorrect because 'helps me' should be followed by the base form of the verb or an infinitive without 'I'. The correct form is 'helps me not forget' to express the intended meaning. This is an error in pronoun and verb form usage after 'helps me'.

× Additionally, some believe that making this can be an extra work that slows them down rather than helping them.

✓ Additionally, some believe that making this can be extra work that slows them down rather than helping them.

The phrase 'an extra work' is incorrect because 'work' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by the indefinite article 'an'. The correct phrase is 'extra work' without 'an'. This is an error involving the incorrect use of quantifiers and articles with uncountable nouns.