List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些重复，表达不够自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并避免重复表达。可以用更地道的表达方式来说明你为什么做购物清单。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to help me remember everything I need and avoid forgetting important items.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，清楚地说明你为什么做工作清单以及它的效果。

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me keep track of my tasks and ensures I don't forget anything. It works very well for me.

提案: 回答内容不连贯，表达混乱，难以理解。建议先明确观点，再用具体理由支持，保持句子连贯。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel overwhelmed when they can't complete all their tasks in one day, which makes them stressed.

提案: 回答基本表达了观点，但用词和句子结构可以更自然流畅。建议使用更准确的词汇和连接词，使表达更连贯。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can carry it anywhere, unlike paper lists which are easy to lose.

× I always make a list too when I go shopping because I need to make a list to ensure what I have to do to avoid forgetting that.

✓ I always make lists too when I go shopping because I need to make a list to ensure what I have to do to avoid forgetting that.

这里的“a list”在前后语境中不一致，前面说“make a list”，后面说“to ensure what I have to do”，暗示可能有多个任务，使用复数“lists”更合适。

× Is I choose to make a list for my work 'cause.

✓ I choose to make a list for my work because.

句子结构错误，‘Is I choose’不符合英语语法，应去掉‘Is’并将‘'cause’改为完整形式‘because’。

× I need to know what I have to finish and.

✓ I need to know what I have to finish.

句子末尾多余的连词‘and’导致句子不完整，应删除。

× To avoid something can be forgot got.

✓ To avoid something being forgotten.

‘forgot got’用法错误，应使用被动形式‘being forgotten’来表达避免某事被遗忘。

× And it always works well.

✓ And it always works well.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× I think some people may. Recognize that today can't finish their tasks where and.

✓ I think some people may realize that they can't finish their tasks today.

句子结构混乱，‘may. Recognize’应连写为‘may realize’，‘today can't finish their tasks where and’语序错误，应调整为‘they can't finish their tasks today’。

× I'll never too.

✓ I never do either.

‘I'll never too’语法错误，应改为‘I never do either’表达否定的意思。

× Do you eat on time? So they dislike making this?

✓ Do you eat on time? So they dislike making lists?

‘making this’不明确，应改为‘making lists’以呼应上下文。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is similar and much easier for me to do that.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is simpler and much easier for me to do that.

‘a list’应改为复数‘lists’以符合习惯表达，‘similar’用词不当，应改为‘simpler’更合适。

× If I choose to make a list of my paper or note, it is not easy for me to take them with me.

✓ If I choose to make a list on paper or notes, it is not easy for me to take them with me.

‘make a list of my paper or note’表达不准确，应改为‘make a list on paper or notes’。