List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Try to use correct grammar and complete sentences. For example, say "Yes, I do. I make a list before I go shopping because I am afraid of forgetting things." Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer natural and concise.

例: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because I am afraid of forgetting important items.

提案: Your answer has good content but is difficult to understand due to grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, "Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and remember all the tasks I need to complete. For example, I write down details for each project, which makes it easier to manage my time effectively."

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and remember all the tasks I need to complete. For example, I write down details for each project, which makes it easier to manage my time effectively.

提案: Your answer is clear but contains minor grammar errors. Use plural form "lists" and correct "becaused" to "because." Also, you can add linking words to improve coherence. For example, "In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and time-consuming."

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and time-consuming.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammar mistakes. Use correct grammar and complete sentences. For example, "I prefer to make a list on paper because it is easy and convenient to write." Also, avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases.

例: I prefer to make a list on paper because it is easy and convenient to write.

× I make a list before I go to the shopping becaused. I afraid to forgot.

✓ I make a list before I go shopping because I am afraid to forget.

The sentence contains incorrect past tense forms and unnecessary words. 'becaused' should be 'because' (correct conjunction), 'afraid to forgot' should be 'afraid to forget' (infinitive form after 'afraid to'). Also, 'go to the shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping' without 'the'.

× I make a list before I go to the shopping becaused. I afraid to forgot.

✓ I make a list before I go shopping because I am afraid to forget.

The phrase 'go to the shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' without any preposition or article.

× I afraid to forgot.

✓ I am afraid to forget.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense, but here the infinitive 'to forget' is needed after 'afraid to'. Also, the verb 'am' is missing after 'I'. So, it should be 'I am afraid to forget.'

× Yes, I always make a list for my work becaused it helps me stay organized and Lee member all the tasks I need to complete for example and write down details them for each project which made it easier to manage my time effectively.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and remember all the tasks I need to complete. For example, I write down details for each project, which makes it easier to manage my time effectively.

'becaused' should be 'because' (correct conjunction). 'Lee member' is a misspelling of 'remember'. The sentence is run-on and needs to be split for clarity. 'made' should be 'makes' to agree with present tense context. 'write down details them' is incorrect; it should be 'write down details'.

× Yes, I always make a list for my work becaused it helps me stay organized and Lee member all the tasks I need to complete for example and write down details them for each project which made it easier to manage my time effectively.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and remember all the tasks I need to complete. For example, I write down details for each project, which makes it easier to manage my time effectively.

The sentence improperly uses 'and' before 'for example' which should start a new sentence or clause. Correct conjunction and sentence structure improve clarity.

× In my opinion, some people don't like making list becaused they find it boring and time-consuming.

✓ In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and time-consuming.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to agree with 'some people' who make multiple lists. Also, 'becaused' should be 'because'.

× I prefer to make a list on paper becaused it easy to make it an. Convenient to write.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it is easy to make and convenient to write.

'becaused' should be 'because'. The phrase 'make it an' is incorrect and should be 'make'. Also, 'Convenient to write' is a fragment and should be connected properly. 'on paper' is correct preposition usage here.