List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm các chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember what I need to buy and saves time.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích rõ hơn về việc bạn có làm danh sách công việc hay không và hiệu quả của nó. Sử dụng câu đơn giản, có liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I sometimes make a small list for my work. It helps me organize my tasks, but unexpected things often happen, so I still have a lot to do.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách, sử dụng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, tránh lỗi phát âm và từ vựng không phù hợp.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember things in their head and think lists waste time.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích rõ ràng lý do bạn thích làm danh sách trên giấy hơn điện thoại, sử dụng câu đơn giản và liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because paper is easy to use and I can check it anytime, even if my phone runs out of battery.

× Of course I own way make a list before going shopping because it is easy to buy something an I not.

✓ Of course I always make a list before going shopping because it is easy to buy something and I do not forget.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing auxiliary verbs, causing confusion. 'Own way' is incorrect; it should be 'always'. 'An I not' is incorrect; it should be 'and I do not'. The sentence structure needs to be clear and logical.

× It's not easy to progress something to buy and it don't waste time to remember.

✓ It's not easy to decide what to buy, and it doesn't waste time to remember.

The phrase 'progress something to buy' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'decide what to buy'. Also, 'it don't' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it doesn't' for subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I only make a little before.

✓ Yes, I only make a small list before.

The phrase 'make a little' is incomplete and unclear. It should specify what is made, such as 'a small list'.

× My work is the work not well, because yeah, it's usually have something certainly happened.

✓ My work does not go well because usually something unexpected happens.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and verb forms. 'My work is the work not well' is incorrect; it should be 'My work does not go well'. 'It's usually have' is incorrect; it should be 'usually something happens'.

× So I have a lot to do.

✓ So I have a lot to do.

This sentence is correct and does not contain grammar errors.

× Some people lie, Mccanlis because they remembered to to do what I intend to do an they can organize the team well and they don't want time to prepare and to remember what to do and they cannot fill.

✓ Some people like making lists because they remember what they intend to do, can organize the team well, and do not want to waste time preparing and remembering what to do, but they cannot fail.

The original sentence contains many errors: 'lie, Mccanlis' is unclear and likely a mishearing of 'like making lists'. 'Remembered to to do' is incorrect; it should be 'remember what they intend to do'. The sentence is run-on and needs to be broken down and clarified.

× I prefer to make a list on Babel than my phone because all the paper are I can RIP easily.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because I can rip the paper easily.

'On Babel' is incorrect; it should be 'on paper'. 'Than my phone' needs 'rather than on my phone' for correct comparison. 'All the paper are I can RIP easily' is incorrect; it should be 'I can rip the paper easily'.

× Even your my phone the power cut up.

✓ Even if the power goes out on my phone,

The phrase 'Even your my phone the power cut up' is unclear and ungrammatical. It should be 'Even if the power goes out on my phone'.

× I can use it to see it and to check it.

✓ I can use it to see and check the list.

The sentence is repetitive and unclear. 'Use it to see it and to check it' is redundant; it should be simplified to 'use it to see and check the list'.

× It I I I make a list on the phone you see very difficult to see when it.

✓ If I make a list on the phone, it is very difficult to see when it is dark.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It should be a conditional sentence explaining difficulty seeing the list on the phone under certain conditions, e.g., 'when it is dark'.