List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with a reason. Use simple and correct sentence structures to express your idea naturally.

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, sometimes I make a list if I have many items to buy.

提案: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Start with a clear topic sentence and then explain how making lists helps you in your work with specific details.

例: Yes, sometimes I make lists for my work because they help me plan my tasks properly. This way, I can achieve my goals more efficiently and stay organized.

提案: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a direct reason with supporting details. Use simple vocabulary and correct sentence structure to express your opinion clearly.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they may not have clear goals or lack the dedication to follow a plan. Without motivation, making lists might seem unnecessary to them.

提案: Your answer is short and somewhat unclear. Provide a clear preference with reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid filler words like 'uh'.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to edit. Also, I always have my phone with me, so I can check my list anytime.

× No, I haven't memory power to what I want to buy the shop and so I didn't make it any less you before the show.

✓ No, I don't have the memory power to remember what I want to buy at the shop, so I didn't make a list before the shop.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'haven't memory power to what' and 'before the show'. The correct prepositions are 'have memory power to remember' and 'at the shop'. Also, 'before the show' seems to be a mishearing of 'before the shop'. The sentence needs proper prepositions to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× No, I haven't memory power to what I want to buy the shop and so I didn't make it any less you before the show.

✓ No, I don't have the memory power to remember what I want to buy at the shop, so I didn't make a list before the shop.

The phrase 'make it any less you' is incorrect and likely a mishearing of 'make a list'. The word 'list' is singular and should be used here. Correct singular/plural usage is important for clarity.

× Yeah, yeah, sometimes I will make it in listed for by what because for a higher return to get all proper way to planning their destination or achieving a goal.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I make a list because it helps me plan properly to achieve my goals or reach my destination.

The original sentence misuses prepositions like 'in listed for by what' and 'for a higher return to get all proper way to planning'. These are incorrect and confusing. Correct prepositions and sentence structure are needed to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Maybe they haven't any goal or to achieve their goals or are they having the maybe not dedication very well?

✓ Maybe they don't have any goals to achieve, or maybe they don't have enough dedication.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'haven't any goal' and 'are they having the maybe not dedication very well'. The pronouns and verb forms are incorrect. 'Don't have' is the correct negative form, and 'dedication' should be used without 'the' and with proper negation.

× Yeah, I uh, I preferred to make it later on, base it on my phone.

✓ Yeah, I prefer to make it later on, based on my phone.

The use of 'preferred' (past tense) is incorrect here because the speaker is expressing a current preference. The present tense 'prefer' should be used. Also, 'base it on my phone' should be 'based on my phone' to correctly use the past participle as an adjective.