List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but fragmented and lacks fluency. Try to combine your ideas into complete sentences and avoid short, choppy phrases. Use linking words to connect your thoughts smoothly.

例: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy.

提案: Your response is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Focus on forming complete sentences and clearly explaining how making a list helps you at work. Use linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, I make a list of tasks I need to complete at work, and I think it works well because it helps me keep track of what I have done.

提案: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and use specific reasons. Avoid incomplete sentences and ensure your vocabulary is appropriate.

例: I think some people dislike making lists because it takes time to write down every task, and they may feel stressed when they see unfinished items on the list.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to explain your preference clearly and provide reasons using complete sentences and linking words.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easy to use, and I can share it with my friends when needed.

× Yes, I always make a list. Before I go shopping. Because it can help me. To remember what I need to buy.

✓ Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it can help me remember what I need to buy.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete. Combining them into one coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I will make a list for my work. Do list out what I need to do? An I think it's work because. Because I will know. What I'm done?

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work and list out what I need to do. I think it works because I will know what I have done.

The original contains sentence fragments, incorrect question forms, and unclear expressions. Correcting sentence structure and verb forms clarifies the meaning and improves grammar.

× An I think it's work because. Because I will know. What I'm done?

✓ And I think it works because I will know what I have done.

The pronoun 'I' was incorrectly written as 'An I', and 'it's work' should be 'it works' to agree with the subject. Also, 'What I'm done?' is incorrect; it should be 'what I have done' to express completed actions.

× I think there are few trouble because they do take time to list out every task.

✓ I think there is little trouble because it takes time to list out every task.

'Few trouble' is incorrect; 'trouble' is uncountable and should be preceded by 'little'. Also, 'they do take time' is awkward; 'it takes time' is more appropriate here.

× And also. Def you Presco. When they see the test. Haven't done.

✓ Also, they feel pressure when they see the tasks they haven't done.

The original sentence is unclear and contains nonsensical words ('Def you Presco'). Correcting pronouns and vocabulary clarifies the intended meaning.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easy. Do s s. And also I can show to my friend when needed.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easy to use, and I can also show it to my friends when needed.

The original contains incomplete and unclear phrases ('Do s s'). Adding missing words and correcting sentence structure improves clarity and grammar.