List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'when I'm having a list every time I go for shopping'. Also, improve grammar by saying 'stay organised' instead of 'stay organize'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me save money and stay organised. Moreover, it prevents me from wandering around the store and buying unnecessary items.

提案: There are some grammar mistakes such as 'I do meet a list' which should be 'I do make a list'. Also, avoid informal expressions like '1st' and use linking words to improve coherence. Try to be more specific about how the list helps you at work.

例: Yes, I always make a list for work because it helps me stay organised and prioritise tasks effectively. For example, I can focus on urgent tasks first and complete less important ones later.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors such as 'people who doesn't' instead of 'people who don't'. Also, the explanation is a bit vague and repetitive. Try to use more precise vocabulary and linking words to clarify your points.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to shop spontaneously. Additionally, they enjoy the adventure of exploring the store without restrictions.

提案: Your answer contains several grammar and clarity issues. For example, 'I preferred to make listen my phone' is incorrect. Also, avoid repetition like 'The main reason is when the main reason is'. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is fast and convenient. Moreover, I can easily check my list anytime without worrying about losing it.

× The reason is when I'm having a list every time I go for a shopping is that it helps me to save money and it helps me to stay organize.

✓ The reason is when I have a list every time I go shopping is that it helps me to save money and it helps me to stay organised.

The phrase 'I'm having a list' is incorrect because 'have' is a stative verb and not usually used in the continuous form. Also, 'go for a shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping' without 'a'. Additionally, 'stay organize' should be 'stay organised' as an adjective is needed here.

× The reason is when I'm having a list every time I go for a shopping is that it helps me to save money and it helps me to stay organize.

✓ The reason is when I have a list every time I go shopping is that it helps me to save money and it helps me to stay organised.

'Stay organize' is incorrect because 'stay' should be followed by an adjective, not a verb. The correct adjective form is 'organised'.

× It also prevents me from wandering around the grocery shop and buy unnecessary items so.

✓ It also prevents me from wandering around the grocery shop and buying unnecessary items.

After the preposition 'from', the verb should be in the gerund form 'buying' not the base form 'buy'. Also, the sentence should not end with 'so' here as it is incomplete.

× Yes, absolutely. I do meet a list for work.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I do make a list for work.

The phrase 'do meet a list' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'make' when referring to creating a list.

× The reason is when I'm doing a list at work, it would help me stay organized and help me prioritize which work I need to do 1st and which things I need to do last.

✓ The reason is when I make a list at work, it helps me stay organised and helps me prioritise which work I need to do first and which things I need to do last.

'Doing a list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make a list'. Also, 'would help' should be 'helps' to match the present tense context. 'Organized' and 'prioritize' should be in British English spelling: 'organised' and 'prioritise'. '1st' should be written as 'first'.

× There are some people who doesn't like to make a list.

✓ There are some people who don't like to make a list.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' not 'doesn't'.

× The reason is it might be that they want to just spontaneously by some things or they are adventurous enough to just wander around in grocery shop and just look for some.

✓ The reason is it might be that they want to just spontaneously buy some things or they are adventurous enough to just wander around the grocery shop and just look for some.

The verb 'buy' was misspelled as 'by'. Also, the preposition 'in' before 'grocery shop' is incorrect; it should be 'the grocery shop' without 'in' or with 'in the grocery shop'. Here, 'around the grocery shop' is correct.

× Choosing between a paper or phone in making a list.

✓ Choosing between paper or phone for making a list.

The article 'a' before 'paper' is unnecessary because 'paper' is uncountable here. Also, 'in making a list' is better expressed as 'for making a list'.

× I preferred to make listen my phone.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone.

'Preferred' is past tense but the context is present preference, so 'prefer' is correct. 'Make listen' is incorrect; it should be 'make lists'. Also, 'on my phone' is the correct preposition.

× The main reason is when the main reason is it fast and handy.

✓ The main reason is that it is fast and handy.

The sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. 'When the main reason is' is unnecessary and should be removed. Also, 'it fast and handy' lacks the verb 'is'.