List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ не совсем ясен и содержит ошибки. Следует использовать более естественные выражения и избегать тавтологии. Например, можно сказать: "Yes, I sometimes make a list of the things I need to buy."

例: Yes, I sometimes make a list of the things I need to buy when I go shopping to avoid forgetting anything.

提案: Ответ неструктурирован и содержит много ошибок, что затрудняет понимание. Рекомендуется отвечать прямо, используя связные предложения и объясняя причины. Например: "No, I don't make a list for my work because I prefer to do tasks as they come."

例: No, I don't make a list for my work because I prefer to do tasks as they come, which helps me stay flexible and motivated.

提案: Ответ содержит повторения и неясные выражения. Следует использовать связные предложения с конкретными причинами. Например: "Some people dislike making lists because it takes time and requires discipline."

例: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time to prepare them and requires strong discipline to follow.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Следует использовать правильные времена и более точные слова. Например: "When I was younger, I used to make lists on paper because it was convenient, but now I prefer using my phone."

例: When I was younger, I used to make lists on paper because it was convenient for me, but now I prefer using my phone to keep my schedule organized.

× Yes, I sometimes make it least what I need to buy in shops.

✓ Yes, I sometimes make a list of what I need to buy in shops.

The phrase 'make it least' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'make a list'. Also, the order and choice of words were incorrect. The sentence should clearly state the action of making a list of items to buy.

× I don't make a list for my work. I I don't have a schedule because I want to do in the time what I can do and I need. Motivation for her. Make a schedule and do it.

✓ I don't make a list for my work because I want to do what I can and need to do in my own time. I need motivation to make a schedule and follow it.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks proper sentence structure and coherence. The correction combines ideas into clear, complete sentences and clarifies the meaning.

× Because some people don't like making lists. Because it is. It. Needs a lot of time and relative. Strong. I think. It is may be difficult for some people.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because it takes a lot of time and requires strong commitment. I think it may be difficult for some people.

The original response is fragmented with incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. The correction forms complete sentences with clear meaning and proper conjunctions.

× Two years ago, when I was a child, I made lists for my day, my schedule, in the paper on the paper because I found it convertible for me. But now I use my phone for schedule.

✓ Two years ago, when I was a child, I made lists for my day and my schedule on paper because I found it convenient for me. But now I use my phone for my schedule.

The phrase 'in the paper on the paper' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on paper'. Also, 'convertible' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'convenient'. Additionally, 'for schedule' should be 'for my schedule' to be grammatically correct.