List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more structured by starting with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons or examples. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors, and keep your sentences concise and natural.

例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list. I prefer to buy only the necessary items I remember, and sometimes I buy unexpected things that catch my eye, which makes shopping more enjoyable for me.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Make sure to finish your sentences and provide a clear opinion with supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: I don't usually make a list for my work because it stresses me out. However, when I do make a list, it helps me organize my tasks and complete them more efficiently.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Focus on expressing your ideas clearly and coherently. Use correct grammar and vocabulary, and provide specific reasons with examples.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel pressured to finish all the tasks, which can cause stress and anxiety.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to complete your sentences and explain your preference clearly with reasons. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can easily check my list whenever I go shopping or go out with friends.

× I just go to the shop and buy necessary things that I've meant.

✓ I just go to the shop and buy necessary things that I meant.

The phrase 'I've meant' incorrectly uses the present perfect tense here. The intended meaning is past, so 'I meant' is correct.

× I don't like to make a list when I go to shop.

✓ I don't like to make a list when I go shopping.

The phrase 'go to shop' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' to indicate the activity.

× If I had to choose among making a list on paper or on my phone, I would love to say that I love to make a list on my phone as I carry my phone likely truly everyone like when I do shopping.

✓ If I had to choose between making a list on paper or on my phone, I would love to say that I love to make a list on my phone as I carry my phone, like truly everyone, when I go shopping.

The preposition 'among' is used for three or more items; here, only two options are given, so 'between' is correct. Also, 'like when I do shopping' should be 'when I go shopping' for correct expression.

× In my view I. I think it makes me feel a little bit stressed, like I had to complete my school work but. But when I do.

✓ In my view, I think it makes me feel a little bit stressed, like I have to complete my school work, but when I do,

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. Correct sentence structure requires complete clauses and proper punctuation.

× In my opinion, I. Kiss people. Don't like make English because it makes them feel a little bit stressed at doing their work as they should complete all the work they have listed which may. Tween. A brief history.

✓ In my opinion, most people don't like making lists because it makes them feel a little bit stressed about doing their work, as they feel they should complete all the work they have listed.

The original sentence contains many fragments and unclear words ('Kiss people', 'make English', 'Tween. A brief history'). The corrected sentence clarifies meaning and corrects sentence structure.