List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，直接表达观点，并用连词连接细节。

例: Yes, I often make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and avoid purchasing unnecessary items.

提案: 回答内容不连贯，语法错误较多，建议用简单句表达观点，并用连词连接原因和结果。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks and complete them efficiently.

提案: 回答表达混乱，词汇使用错误，建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并给出具体原因。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to remember things naturally.

提案: 回答不连贯且含糊，表达不清楚，建议明确表达偏好并给出具体理由。

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because it feels more natural and helps me remember better than using my phone.

× Yes, I often do this because I think I'll make a list is a good way for me and I can understand the goals I must have by and some and some goes I I don't need to buy it.

✓ Yes, I often do this because I think making a list is a good way for me and I can understand the goals I must have, and some things I don't need to buy.

这里动词短语应使用动名词形式'making'，表示“做某事”作为主语。原句中使用了不正确的动词形式，导致句子结构混乱。建议将'll make a list'改为'making a list'。

× Yes, absolutely. I think her is a good method on as you think you can. If you make a list you do things can come. Call. Yes, it'll work well.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I think it is a good method because you think you can. If you make a list, you can get things done. Yes, it'll work well.

原句中使用了错误的代词'here'，应使用'it'指代方法。此外，句子结构混乱，缺少必要的连接词和助动词，导致表达不清。建议使用正确的代词并调整句子结构。

× I think are these people think America list is very travel for their. Because in their life or not error, how completely time to make lists?

✓ I think these people think making a list is very troublesome for them because in their life, they don't have enough time to make lists.

原句中代词使用错误，如'are these people'应为'these people'，'America list'应为'making a list'，'for their'应为'for them'。句子结构混乱，表达不清。建议使用正确的代词和词组。

× Absolutely, I'm worry like to make a list on paper. I think in full as a. Harmful for our physical health. For paper you can size your.

✓ Absolutely, I prefer to make a list on paper. I think using a phone is harmful for our physical health. With paper, you can see it clearly.

原句中代词和表达不当，如'I'm worry like'应为'I prefer'，'in full as a'表达不明，'For paper you can size your'不完整。建议使用正确的代词和完整表达。