List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，缺少具体细节。建议回答时先明确表达观点，然后用具体理由或例子支持，避免语法错误和重复。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need to buy. For example, last week I wrote down all the ingredients for a recipe, which made shopping much easier and faster.

提案: 回答内容混乱，语法错误严重，难以理解。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子说明清单如何帮助工作，提高表达的逻辑性和准确性。

例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work every day. It helps me organize my tasks and ensures I don't forget important deadlines.

提案: 表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多。建议先给出原因，再用具体例子或解释支持观点，注意句子结构和词汇准确性。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive or time-consuming. For instance, some prefer to remember things naturally rather than writing them down.

提案: 回答不够具体，表达不流畅，理由不充分。建议明确表达偏好，并给出具体原因和例子，避免语法错误。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because it feels more natural and helps me focus better. Using my phone can be distracting due to notifications and screen time.

× Yes, I'm off and do this because I think it's a good way to remember the cause.

✓ Yes, I often do this because I think it's a good way to remember the cause.

原句中“I'm off and do this”结构不正确，应该使用“I often do this”表示经常做某事，符合语法和语义。

× All. I must have by.

✓ All I must buy.

原句“All. I must have by.”语序混乱且单词拼写错误，应为“All I must buy.”表示“我必须买的所有东西”。

× And uh, let me think. In general, it's a good message.

✓ And uh, let me think. In general, it's a good method.

原句中“good message”用词不当，应为“good method”表示“好方法”，更符合语境。

× Yes I'm off and do this cause.

✓ Yes, I often do this because.

“I'm off and do this cause”结构错误，应为“I often do this because”，表达经常做某事的原因。

× Michael is to is a good way to.

✓ I think it is a good way to.

原句无意义且结构混乱，应改为“I think it is a good way to”，表达观点。

× Up how I speak this all is come.

✓ It helps me organize everything.

原句无意义且语法错误，改为“It helps me organize everything.”更通顺。

× Surprise is that I'm more wary.

✓ The surprise is that I'm more careful.

“wary”用词不当，改为“careful”更符合语境，且加上定冠词使句子完整。

× I think it depends on peoples personality because for me I was a person.

✓ I think it depends on people's personalities because for me, I am a person.

“peoples”应为“people's”表示所有格，“personality”应为复数“personalities”，时态和人称也需调整。

× I like a Mecca list but for other people that don't like make a list on that thing is a tribal.

✓ I like to make a list but for other people who don't like to make a list, that is typical.

“Mecca list”拼写错误，应为“make a list”；“that thing is a tribal”表达不清，改为“that is typical”更合适。

× I was a person.

✓ I am a person.

此处描述现在的性格，时态应为现在时“am”，而非过去时“was”。

× for other people that don't like make a list

✓ for other people who don't like to make a list

“that”用于指物，指人时应使用“who”；“like make”缺少不定式“to”，应为“like to make”。

× Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

✓ Do you prefer to make a list on paper or on your phone?

“on paper”与“your phone”前应保持介词一致，补充“on your phone”使句子平行。

× Absolutely. I preferred to make a list on paper because I think paper is good for our health.

✓ Absolutely. I prefer to make a list on paper because I think paper is good for our health.

此处表达习惯，时态应为一般现在时“prefer”，而非过去时“preferred”。

× Oh when says the phone, I think it's bad for our. Ice.

✓ Oh, when it comes to the phone, I think it's bad for our eyes.

“when says the phone”语法错误，应为“when it comes to the phone”；“our. Ice”拼写错误，应为“our eyes”。