List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Apni answer e clear and direct sentence use korun. Apnar answer e onek repetition ache, ar kichu sentence incomplete. Apni chesta korun 3-4 sentence e clear vabe kotha bolte, jate answer natural lage. Apni kichu linking word use korte paren, jemon 'because' or 'so' bhalo vabe sentence connect korar jonno.

例: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because I often forget some grocery items. So, having a list helps me remember everything I need to buy.

提案: Apnar uttor e onek confusion ache, ar sentence gulo incomplete. Apni chesta korun prothome direct uttor din, tarpor kichu supporting details din. Linking words use korun jate sentence gulo logically connected hoy. Vocabulary o simple r clear rakhen.

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. This way, I can complete my tasks efficiently and not forget anything important.

提案: Apnar uttor e onek unclear and incomplete sentence ache. Apni chesta korun proshner shathe related clear reason din, ar supporting details add korun. Linking words use korun jate uttor logical hoy.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming. Also, they may prefer to remember things in their mind rather than writing them down.

提案: Apnar uttor e onek repetition and incomplete sentence ache. Apni chesta korun prothome direct uttor din, tarpor kichu supporting details add korun. Linking words use korun jate uttor bhalo flow kore.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always have it with me. This way, I don't have to worry about losing paper lists and can check my list anytime.

× Yeah, I I do make a list when. I should I go to shop because I forget some? I dem so grocery item so I I prefer list because I don't for get groceries items. So. It is very.

✓ Yeah, I do make a list when I go shopping because I forget some grocery items, so I prefer to make a list because I don't forget grocery items. It is very helpful.

The original sentence has multiple sentence fragments and unclear structure, making it difficult to understand. The correction combines ideas into coherent sentences, removes unnecessary repetitions, and corrects word order for clarity.

× I should I go to shop because I forget some?

✓ I should go shopping because I forget some items.

The phrase 'go to shop' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and needs simplification for clarity.

× I don't for get groceries items.

✓ I don't forget grocery items.

The phrase 'groceries items' is incorrect; 'grocery items' is the correct plural form. 'Groceries' is a plural noun referring to food items collectively, but when used as an adjective, 'grocery' is correct.

× An absolutely. I usually make a list 2O when I work because work is so important in daily life because. At work. Is keeping our keeping her keeping hardworking is showing.

✓ Absolutely. I usually make a list when I work because work is very important in daily life. Being hardworking is important at work.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. The correction restructures the sentences for clarity and grammatical correctness, removing unclear phrases like '2O' and 'keeping our keeping her keeping hardworking is showing'.

× I feel far. People like making list because some people forget. We hear anything because you. You can the making the live account making the list.

✓ I feel some people don't like making lists because they forget things. Making a list helps to remember important things.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear phrases. The correction clarifies the subject and object pronouns and simplifies the sentence for better understanding.

× People like making list

✓ People like making lists

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' when referring to the general activity of making lists.

× I feel far make a list on phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

The phrase 'feel far' is incorrect; 'prefer' is the correct verb here. Also, 'on phone' should be 'on my phone' to specify possession.

× I don't flip out the paper.

✓ I don't use paper lists.

The phrase 'flip out the paper' is incorrect and unclear. The correction uses a clearer expression to convey the intended meaning.

× I don't like. List on fair farby cause fear far forget anything any place phone with me is a very.

✓ I don't like lists on paper because I might forget them, but my phone is always with me, so it's very convenient.

The original sentence contains many unclear and incorrect words. The correction replaces them with appropriate words and phrases to convey the intended meaning clearly.