List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về việc bạn lập danh sách mua sắm.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the market. For example, I write down all the vegetables and fruits I need for the next two days to make sure I don't forget anything.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng, làm giảm tính hiệu quả và tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work. It helps me plan my tasks clearly and organize what I need to do during the day, so I can work more efficiently.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu do lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it unnecessary or believe they can remember things without writing them down.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng bị lỗi ngữ pháp và câu chưa mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: I prefer to make a list on paper because writing things down helps me remember them better, and I can easily visualize my tasks.

× Before going shopping I usually is necklace to know what exactly I want to buy.

✓ Before going shopping I usually make a list to know exactly what I want to buy.

The original sentence uses 'is necklace' which is incorrect. The verb should be in the base form 'make' to match the subject 'I' and the adverb 'usually'. The phrase 'make a list' is the correct collocation here.

× For example go to the market, I will list out all the multi are vegetables missed or force that I need for next two days.

✓ For example, when I go to the market, I will list out all the vegetables and fruits that I need for the next two days.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear words like 'multi are vegetables missed or force'. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure by adding 'when' and proper nouns 'vegetables and fruits'.

× Of course I all the way have to make a list format work.

✓ Of course, I always have to make a list for work.

The phrase 'all the way' is incorrectly used; the correct adverb is 'always'. Also, 'format work' should be 'for work'.

× It should have said. Is Sims be a plan for me to know what exactly they want to do and I heart have to do during the working days?

✓ It should be a plan for me to know exactly what I want to do and what I have to do during the working days.

The original sentence has unclear pronouns and words like 'Is Sims be' and 'I heart have to do' which are incorrect. The correction clarifies the pronouns and verb forms.

× And it's really helpful for me to organize all the tasks that I have to follow.

✓ And it's really helpful for me to organize all the tasks that I have to complete.

The verb 'follow' is not appropriate here; 'complete' or 'do' fits better with 'tasks'.

× I think some people to lie making a list because as they my. Thing is unnecessary an W that time so were they can remember it.

✓ I think some people don't like making a list because they think it is unnecessary and they can remember it at that time.

The original sentence has many unclear and incorrect words like 'to lie', 'as they my. Thing', 'an W that time', and 'were they'. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects pronouns and verb forms.

× For me, I prefer to make a list on the paper because I believe that when I write it all the things out it's really help me to remember is easily an I also can. Imagine.

✓ For me, I prefer to make a list on paper because I believe that when I write all the things out, it really helps me to remember easily and I can also imagine them.

The phrase 'on the paper' should be 'on paper'. Also, 'it's really help' should be 'it really helps'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct verb forms.