List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答比较自然且内容完整，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时避免重复表达，比如“remember”。

例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need and prevents me from overspending. Usually, I write it down on paper before heading to the store.

提案: 回答结构清晰，内容具体。可以增加一些连接词如“therefore”来增强逻辑性，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. Therefore, I use a digital app that reminds me about my tasks, and I feel satisfied when I can check things off.

提案: 回答中有语法错误（如'reminder remember'），建议注意用词准确，并使用连接词如“because”或“so”使句子更连贯。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time. They believe they can remember their tasks without writing them down, so they prefer to start working immediately.

提案: 回答中有语法错误（如缺少主语和时态错误），建议注意句子完整性和时态一致，同时使用连接词如“because”使表达更自然。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy the feeling of writing things down. It is easier for me to remember things that way, and I enjoy crossing items off the list when I'm done.

× They believe they can reminder remember what they need to do without writing it down.

✓ They believe they can remember what they need to do without writing it down.

句中“reminder”是名词，错误地用在了动词位置，正确的动词形式是“remember”。应使用动词原形“remember”来表达“记得”。

× So they prefer to just to start working on their tasks.

✓ So they prefer to just start working on their tasks.

“prefer to just to start”中多了一个不必要的“to”，应去掉多余的“to”，使表达更简洁正确。

× Is easier for me to remember things that way and I enjoying crossing things off the list when I'm done.

✓ It is easier for me to remember things that way and I enjoy crossing things off the list when I'm done.

句首缺少主语，应加“It”。“I enjoying”中“enjoying”应为动词原形“enjoy”，因为前面有主语“I”，动词应与主语一致。