List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: In English (Cambodia), you should answer the question directly instead of repeating it. Try to give a clear and natural response with some details about your shopping habits.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

提案: Avoid repeating the question. Instead, answer directly and explain if making lists helps you at work, using linking words to connect your ideas.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work tasks, and it works well because it keeps me organized and focused throughout the day.

提案: Don't repeat the question. Provide reasons why some people might dislike making lists, using specific details and linking words to make your answer clear and natural.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming, and they prefer to remember things mentally instead.

提案: Answer the question directly and clearly. Explain your preference and give reasons, using linking words to connect your ideas naturally.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient and I can easily edit it whenever I need to.

× Do you prefer to make a list on paper on your phone?

✓ Do you prefer to make a list on paper or on your phone?

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'on' twice without a conjunction, causing confusion. The correct conjunction 'or' should be used to present alternatives clearly, and the preposition 'on' should be repeated before 'your phone' for clarity.