List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 질문에 직접적으로 대답하고, 이유를 간단하고 명확하게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 문장 구조를 단순하게 유지하고, 불필요한 반복을 피하세요.

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.

提案: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 리스트를 사용하는 이유와 효과를 간단하고 명확하게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks by importance, and it works well to keep me focused.

提案: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 이유를 명확하게 제시하고, 문장을 완성형으로 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Some people don't like making lists because it can make them feel stressed or pressured to complete all the tasks.

提案: 답변이 부분적으로 이해되지만 문법과 문장 연결이 부자연스럽습니다. 이유를 명확하게 설명하고, 문장 연결어를 사용하여 자연스럽게 말하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I don't forget my lists like I might with paper.

× No I didn't because my MBTI is P so I'm preferred to.

✓ No, I didn't because my MBTI is P, so I prefer to.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm preferred to' which is a passive form and incorrect here. The correct form is 'I prefer to' in the present tense to express habitual preference. Also, 'didn't' is past tense, but the preference is a current state, so present tense 'prefer' is appropriate.

× Was I buy what me by two when I was in the shop?

✓ Did I buy two of what I wanted when I was in the shop?

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. The correct question form in past tense is 'Did I buy...' followed by the object. The phrase 'what me by two' is incorrect and should be 'two of what I wanted' to make sense.

× Yes, when I'm work I prefer to take the wrist because.

✓ Yes, when I work, I prefer to take the list because.

The phrase 'when I'm work' is incorrect; it should be 'when I work' using the base form after 'when'. Also, 'take the wrist' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'take the list'.

× The first list is what this this work as I had the.

✓ The first list is about what work I have to do.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. A clearer sentence is needed to express the idea that the list contains tasks to be done.

× Very important or not important? So it's come back.

✓ Whether it is very important or not important, I come back to it.

The original sentence lacks clarity and proper structure. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses proper conjunctions and verb forms.

× My work is very.

✓ My work is very important.

The original sentence is incomplete. Adding an adjective like 'important' completes the thought.

× Because it can make people stress.

✓ Because it can make people stressed.

The verb 'make' is followed by an object and an adjective describing the object. 'Stress' is a noun; the correct adjective form is 'stressed'.

× I think this lists when I today I will.

✓ I think about these lists when I plan my day.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction provides a clear and grammatical sentence.

× Do that. And. It's the cut line is very hard.

✓ Doing that is very hard.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction combines the ideas into a clear sentence.

× So I think so people doesn't like this.

✓ So I think some people don't like this.

'People' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' not 'doesn't'. Also, 'so' is repeated unnecessarily.

× Because when I using the paper I.

✓ Because when I use paper, I...

After 'when', the base form of the verb is used, so 'using' should be 'use'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected for grammar.

× This paper where is it but smartphone I can.

✓ I lose the paper, but I can use my smartphone.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction clarifies the intended meaning.

× Using every time so I don't forget this lists.

✓ I can use it anytime so I don't forget these lists.

'Using every time' is incorrect; 'I can use it anytime' is correct. Also, 'this lists' should be 'these lists' (plural).