List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答没有直接回应问题，表达不清晰，建议练习理解问题并用简洁明了的句子直接回答。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store to ensure I don't forget anything.

提案: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，建议使用完整句子并清楚表达观点。

例: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.

提案: 表达含糊且语法错误较多，建议学习如何用简单句表达原因并注意语法正确。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or difficult to organize their tasks.

提案: 回答中有语法和用词错误，建议练习正确表达偏好并使用恰当词汇。

例: I prefer to make my lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to edit whenever I need.

× Do you make early stuff when you shop?

✓ Do you make a list when you shop?

这里的 'early stuff' 用法不正确，应该用 'a list' 来表达购物时列清单的意思。代词和名词的使用不当导致句意不清。

× Yes, I do, I think. It is very good for me too. Do my work view.

✓ Yes, I do, I think. It is very good for me too. It helps me with my work.

句子中 'Do my work view' 结构不正确，缺少主语和谓语的正确搭配，应该改为 'It helps me with my work' 来表达帮助工作的意思。

× Because I think my cane later is very important for people, but it is doesn't easy for people to make it.

✓ Because I think my calendar is very important for people, but it isn't easy for people to make it.

'my cane later' 应为 'my calendar'，且 'it is doesn't easy' 语法错误，应为 'it isn't easy'。代词和动词的使用错误导致句子不通顺。

× I'm like her preferred to make our list are on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make my list on my phone.

句子结构混乱，'I'm like her preferred' 不符合语法，应直接说 'I prefer'，且 'our list are' 主谓不一致，应为 'my list is'，整体改为更简洁的表达。

× Because I think it is very easy for me to know my laser and it is very good for me.

✓ Because I think it is very easy for me to check my list and it is very good for me.

'my laser' 应为 'my list'，单词拼写错误导致意思不明。