List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use correct grammar and sentence structure. For example, say 'I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember to buy only necessary items and avoid spending too much on unnecessary products.' Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise and clear.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me focus on buying only the necessary items and prevents me from overspending on things I don't need.

提案: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, say 'Yes, I make a list for my work because time is very precious. By doing so, I can save time and increase my productivity by managing tasks efficiently.'

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because time is very precious. This helps me save time and complete all my tasks on schedule, which increases my productivity.

提案: Focus on answering the question clearly and use correct grammar. For example, say 'Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can remember everything. However, making lists can help sharpen the mind and remember important details.'

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think they can remember everything. However, making lists is beneficial as it helps sharpen the mind and remember important information.

提案: Use clearer sentence structure and linking words. For example, say 'I prefer making lists on my phone because I carry it every day. Using digital lists reduces paper use, which helps save trees, and the lists can be saved for a long time.'

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I carry it with me daily. This way, I reduce paper usage, which helps save trees, and I can keep my lists saved for a long time.

× Yes, I always make list when I visit to shop becauses it keeps me in her mind to purchase only limited things and I cannot spend my over money in this unusual products.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I visit the shop because it keeps me in my mind to purchase only limited things and I cannot spend my extra money on these unusual products.

The word 'list' is countable and singular here, so it needs the article 'a'. 'Visit to shop' is incorrect; it should be 'visit the shop'. 'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. 'Her mind' should be 'my mind' to match the subject. 'Over money' is incorrect; 'extra money' is appropriate. 'In this unusual products' should be 'on these unusual products' because we use 'on' with spending money and 'these' for plural nouns.

× Yes, I make a list of my work becauses a time is a very precious so I can save my time and doing another work to increase my productivity.

✓ Yes, I make a list of my work because time is very precious, so I can save my time and do other work to increase my productivity.

'Becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. 'A time' is incorrect; 'time' is uncountable and does not need 'a'. 'Doing another work' should be 'do other work' because 'work' is uncountable and 'do' is the correct verb form here.

× So I can make a list that I can complete my every kind of work on our time without any problem.

✓ So I can make a list so that I can complete every kind of my work on our time without any problem.

The sentence structure is awkward; 'that' should be 'so that' to express purpose. 'My every kind of work' is better as 'every kind of my work' for clarity. 'On our time' is unclear but kept as is since it may refer to a specific context.

× How many people does not like to make English because they think they can remember everything in their mind and making?

✓ Many people do not like to make lists because they think they can remember everything in their mind and making lists.

'How many people does not like' is incorrect; it should be 'Many people do not like' for plural subject-verb agreement. 'Make English' is incorrect; likely intended 'make lists'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity.

× There is also benefit to making list.

✓ There is also a benefit to making a list.

'Benefit' is countable here and needs the article 'a'. 'Making list' should be 'making a list' to be grammatically correct.

× The people can sharp their mind and it is always useful for learning new details becauses we can remind everything in mind.

✓ People can sharpen their minds and it is always useful for learning new details because we can remember everything in mind.

'Sharp' should be 'sharpen' as a verb. 'Mind' should be plural 'minds' to match 'people'. 'Becauses' is misspelled; correct is 'because'. 'Remind' is incorrect; 'remember' is the correct verb here.

× I prefer to make list on my phone because I carry my phone every day and there is a new technology no one use the paper.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because I carry my phone every day and with new technology, no one uses paper.

'Make list' should be 'make lists' for plural. 'There is a new technology' is awkward; better to say 'with new technology'. 'No one use' should be 'no one uses' for subject-verb agreement. 'The paper' should be 'paper' as an uncountable noun here.

× There is a less paper use and it saves trees.

✓ There is less paper use and it saves trees.

'Less' is used with uncountable nouns like 'paper', so 'a less paper use' is incorrect; it should be 'less paper use' without 'a'.

× But mostly I use phones and it can be saved for lifetime which is beneficial for me.

✓ But mostly I use my phone and it can be saved for a lifetime which is beneficial for me.

'Phones' should be singular 'phone' as referring to the personal device. 'For lifetime' should be 'for a lifetime' with the article 'a'.