List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有重复和语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。

例: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me control my spending and avoid buying unnecessary items.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和语法，表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work every day. It helps me keep track of my tasks and finish them on time.

提案: 回答中语句不完整且逻辑不够清晰。建议理清思路，使用连接词使表达更连贯，避免语法错误。

例: I'm not sure why, but some people might find making lists boring or time-consuming. They may also feel that lists limit their creativity and flexibility.

提案: 回答中有很多语法和表达错误，句子不连贯。建议简化表达，使用清晰的句子结构，并避免重复。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because it's easier to see and I can stick the list in places where I will notice it as a reminder.

× I I see you're in a shopping precise so I'm making a list is a good habit for me.

✓ I see you're in a shopping precinct, so making a list is a good habit for me.

句中“I'm making a list is a good habit”结构不正确，应使用动名词短语“making a list”作为主语。这里需要用动名词形式表示习惯行为。

× I think is quite efficient because I it's like A to do list.

✓ I think it is quite efficient because it's like a to-do list.

句中缺少主语“it”，导致句子结构不完整。应补充“it”使句子完整。

× I can check the things I need to do everyday and ensure I'm make everything finish it by time.

✓ I can check the things I need to do every day and ensure I make everything finished on time.

“I'm make”语法错误，应改为“I make”；“finish it by time”表达不准确，应改为“finished on time”表示按时完成。

× I think it's workable so far.

✓ I think it has been workable so far.

“so far”通常与完成时态连用，表示到目前为止的状态，故应使用现在完成时“has been”。

× To be honest, I'm not sure the reason why they do not do this very efficient way, but I think some people may find it really boring, more time consuming, so they will and they think list limited their creativity and make them less flexible.

✓ To be honest, I'm not sure the reason why they do not use this very efficient way, but I think some people may find it really boring and more time-consuming, so they think lists limit their creativity and make them less flexible.

句中“do not do this very efficient way”表达不当，应改为“do not use this very efficient way”；“so they will and they think”结构混乱，应删去“will”；“list limited”时态错误，应改为“lists limit”。

× I stick to the orange in a way which is to make a list on the paper because it's. More easier and I can use the speaker and then we'll stick the paper that adds to the places where I can I can see clearly and then that will be a good reminder for me.

✓ I stick to the original way, which is to make a list on paper because it's easier, and I can use a sticker and then stick the paper in places where I can see clearly, and that will be a good reminder for me.

“orange”应为“original”；“more easier”比较级错误，应为“easier”；“use the speaker”应为“use a sticker”；“adds to the places”应为“stick the paper in places”。