List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用具体细节支持。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and avoid forgetting important items.

提案: 回答缺乏连贯性，表达不完整。建议用完整句子表达观点，并用连接词使内容连贯。

例: Yes, I make a list for my homework, but it doesn't always work because I sometimes feel lazy and fail to complete all the tasks on the list.

提案: 表达混乱，语法错误多，难以理解。建议用简单句子表达观点，并提供具体原因。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and think it's unnecessary.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达有误。建议直接表达偏好并说明原因，使用连贯句子。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because crossing out completed tasks gives me a sense of accomplishment.

× Yes, I always make the list when I shop an it help me to ensure that any things.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I shop and it helps me to ensure that anything.

这里“the list”应改为不定冠词“a list”，因为泛指购物时的清单；“an it help”中“an”应为“and”，“help”应加第三人称单数“helps”，因为主语是单数“it”；“any things”应为不可数或单数形式“anything”。

× Is alright in anything.

✓ Everything is alright.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，正确表达应为“Everything is alright.”，即“所有东西都没问题”。

× I bought it and also.

✓ I bought it as well.

原句不完整，缺少连接词和完整表达，改为“I bought it as well.”更通顺。

× It helped me with thing.

✓ It helped me with things.

“thing”应为复数形式“things”，表示多项事务。

× My badge at an.

✓ My badge as well.

原句不完整且含糊，应改为“My badge as well.”表示“我的徽章也一样”。

× To make sure that I don't.

✓ To make sure that I don't forget anything.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，补充完整表达。

× I do make a list for my. Homework, but.

✓ I do make a list for my homework, but

“Homework”是不可数名词，不需要复数形式，去掉句中多余的句号。

× I don't think that it really work because.

✓ I don't think that it really works because

“work”应加第三人称单数“works”，因为主语是“it”。

× I'm also I'm a very lazy person, so I can't really and to the list of I cannot always finish at least.

✓ I'm also a very lazy person, so I can't really stick to the list and I cannot always finish at least.

原句结构混乱，缺少连贯性，调整为更通顺的表达。

× So not.

✓ So, no.

原句不完整，补充为简短否定回答。

× I would say I'm lay, have a good.

✓ I would say I have a good memory.

“lay”应为“lazy”或去掉，且句子不完整，补充完整表达。

× Memory. Are they bring so they don't think that make less is necessary for them so.

✓ I have a good memory, so they don't think that making lists is necessary for them.

原句断断续续，语法混乱，调整为完整句子。

× So that's why some some people do not like to. Come make a list.

✓ So that's why some people do not like to make a list.

“Come”多余且错误，去掉；“some some”重复，去掉一个。

× I would say I'm making a list on paper because.

✓ I would say I prefer making a list on paper because

“I'm making”时态不合适，改为“I prefer making”更符合表达习惯。

× Because when I finish my text an hour erasers my. My word and it's really make me fail sense of accomplishment so that's why.

✓ Because when I finish my text and erase it, my words disappear and it really makes me feel a sense of accomplishment, so that's why.

原句断句错误，语法混乱，调整为完整连贯的句子。