List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать правильный порядок слов и более связные предложения, чтобы ответ был понятен и естественен.

例: Sometimes I make a shopping list with my mom to avoid forgetting anything. I also prefer to use my phone to make lists because it is more convenient for me.

提案: Ответ слишком короткий и содержит ошибки. Следует использовать полные предложения и объяснять причины более ясно, чтобы ответ был логичным и связным.

例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I have a good memory and rarely forget my tasks.

提案: Ответ неясен и содержит много ошибок. Рекомендуется строить предложения правильно и использовать связующие слова для логичности.

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they have a very good memory and don't need reminders.

提案: Ответ содержит много повторений и грамматических ошибок. Следует использовать более четкие и связные предложения, чтобы выразить предпочтения ясно.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and helps me remember all important things.

× Well, sometimes makes list me my mom for don't forget I something and I always make a list in my phone when shop BIH 'cause it's comfortable for me.

✓ Well, sometimes my mom makes a list for me so I don't forget anything, and I always make a list on my phone when I shop because it's comfortable for me.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing auxiliary verbs, causing confusion. The subject 'my mom' should precede the verb 'makes', and 'for don't forget I something' should be corrected to 'so I don't forget anything'. Also, 'when shop BIH' should be 'when I shop'. Clear subject-verb-object order is essential for clarity.

× No, I don't like make a list for my work because I don't forget anything when said about my work.

✓ No, I don't like to make a list for my work because I don't forget anything when talking about my work.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to make' rather than the base form 'make'. Also, 'when said about my work' is incorrect; it should be 'when talking about my work' to express the intended meaning.

× Now in my opinion, people, people who memory is. Very good. They don't make a list about who Don't forget our ello all sink.

✓ In my opinion, people who have a very good memory don't make lists because they don't forget anything.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases. 'People who memory is very good' should be 'people who have a very good memory'. 'Don't make a list about who Don't forget our ello all sink' is unclear and corrected to 'don't make lists because they don't forget anything' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I like I prefer a Michalis on my phone because it's comfortable for me and I don't for get all things and especially for a especially important things and it I. I say all are.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's comfortable for me, and I don't forget anything, especially important things.

The original sentence has many errors including incorrect prepositions and unclear phrases. 'Michalis' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'making lists'. 'I like I prefer a Michalis on my phone' is corrected to 'I prefer to make a list on my phone'. Also, 'for get all things' should be 'forget anything'. The sentence is simplified for clarity and correctness.