List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，比如“for making A to do list”应为“making a to-do list”。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时注意冠词和动词搭配。

例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list before shopping. It helps me stay organized and remember important items. Also, it allows me to keep track of my expenses effectively.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“Is helpful indeed”应为“It is helpful indeed”。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并且避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I write a to-do list every morning before work. It helps me remember important tasks and ensures I don't miss anything. This habit is very helpful for my daily productivity.

提案: 回答中表达不清晰且有语法错误，如“so I will otherwise people around me to do this”不合逻辑。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词。

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and feel it's unnecessary. However, I prefer making lists because it helps me stay organized and reminds others to do the same.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和不完整句子，如“Compared was making a list on my phone”和“because it.”。建议完整表达原因，注意句子结构和词汇使用。

例: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone. Since I keep a daily journal, I include my to-do lists there. Writing by hand helps me remember tasks better and feel more organized.

× I have a good habit of for making A to do list before I shop.

✓ I have a good habit of making a to-do list before I shop.

The phrase 'of for making' is incorrect; the preposition 'of' should be followed directly by the gerund 'making'. Also, 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with lowercase and hyphens as it is a common noun phrase.

× I think this is a good way to help me stay organized and how made you remember something important and it also helps me to capable to track over expenses.

✓ I think this is a good way to help me stay organized and remember something important, and it also helps me to keep track of expenses.

The original sentence is confusing and contains incorrect phrases like 'how made you remember' and 'helps me to capable to track over expenses'. The corrected sentence simplifies and clarifies the meaning, using correct verb forms and prepositions.

× I have a habit of writing journals every day, so every morning I write A to do list before I work.

✓ I have a habit of writing journals every day, so every morning I write a to-do list before I work.

The phrase 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with lowercase and hyphens. The rest of the sentence is grammatically correct.

× It helps me to write down something important and not miss the things I should do on that day.

✓ It helps me write down important things and not miss what I should do that day.

The phrase 'helps me to write down something important' is acceptable but can be more natural without 'to'. Also, 'the things I should do on that day' is better expressed as 'what I should do that day' for clarity and conciseness.

× Is helpful indeed.

✓ It is helpful indeed.

The sentence lacks a subject. Adding 'It' completes the sentence structure.

× Everyone has his or her own opinions I guess.

✓ Everyone has their own opinions, I guess.

Using 'his or her' is grammatically correct but can be awkward; 'their' is commonly used as a singular gender-neutral pronoun. Also, a comma is needed before 'I guess' as an interjection.

× Maybe they just have very good memory and for them there's no need to make a list.

✓ Maybe they just have a very good memory, and for them, there's no need to make a list.

The phrase 'have very good memory' needs the article 'a' before 'very good memory'. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× Well for me making list is a good way so I will otherwise people around me to do this.

✓ Well, for me, making a list is a good way, so I encourage people around me to do this.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Making list' should be 'making a list'. The phrase 'so I will otherwise people around me to do this' is incorrect; 'encourage' fits the intended meaning.

× Compared was making a list on my phone.

✓ Compared to making a list on my phone,

The phrase 'Compared was making' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'Compared to making' when making comparisons.

× I prefer to write it down in my notebooks.

✓ I prefer to write it down in my notebook.

Usually, one keeps a single notebook for such lists; 'notebooks' plural is less common here unless multiple notebooks are used. Also, this correction aligns with the context.

× I have a habit of keeping a journal every day and my diary contends contains our To Do List.

✓ I have a habit of keeping a journal every day, and my diary contains our to-do list.

The word 'contends' is incorrect; it should be 'contains'. Also, 'To Do List' should be lowercase and hyphenated as 'to-do list'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I prefer to write data by hand because it.

✓ I prefer to write data by hand because it feels more personal.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main clause after 'because it'. Adding a reason completes the sentence logically.