List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些语法错误，表达不够自然，句子较长且有些重复。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并注意时态和介词的正确使用。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on paper because I am afraid of forgetting something. It also helps me avoid spending too much money on unnecessary items.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，正确使用时态和连接词，使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I write my work schedule on the computer. It helps me know what tasks I need to do each day and avoid being distracted by sudden phone calls.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议先明确观点，然后用完整句子解释原因，避免拼写错误。

例: Some people may not like making lists because they feel it controls their busy schedules and limits their flexibility.

提案: 回答表达不清楚，语法和用词错误较多。建议简化句子，明确表达偏好并给出具体理由。

例: I prefer writing my list on paper because it helps me remember better than typing on my phone.

× Yes, I afraid I forgot to buy something so I will write down my shopping list on the paper to let me remember what I need and in case to spend too much money on buying another stuff we on shopping.

✓ Yes, I am afraid I will forget to buy something, so I will write down my shopping list on paper to help me remember what I need and avoid spending too much money on buying other stuff when shopping.

句中缺少助动词“am”导致表达不完整，且“in case to spend”用法错误，应改为“avoid spending”表示避免发生某事。建议使用正确的情态动词和固定搭配。

× Yes, I will write down my working schedule in the computer, let me know what should I do in one day and I will not stop with the suddenly phone call.

✓ Yes, I write down my working schedule on the computer to let me know what I should do in one day, and I will not be interrupted by sudden phone calls.

“will write”时态不符合习惯表达，应使用一般现在时表示习惯动作；“let me know what should I do”语序错误，疑问句语序不应在陈述句中使用；“stop with the suddenly phone call”表达不当，应改为“be interrupted by sudden phone calls”。

× Maybe there are show person they think that making a list will. Control their sick schedules.

✓ Maybe some people think that making a list will control their busy schedules.

“show person”应为“some people”，且“they”多余；“sick schedules”应为“busy schedules”，词汇使用错误。建议注意代词和词汇的正确使用。

× I think that writing down my list under paper will be more remembered than when I typed on the phone because I write down and I will know that the schedule list upload time.

✓ I think that writing down my list on paper will help me remember better than typing it on the phone because when I write it down, I know the schedule's upload time.

“under paper”应为“on paper”，介词使用错误；“more remembered”表达不自然，应改为“help me remember better”；句子结构混乱，需调整使表达清晰。