List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Usually I don't make a list when I want to shop, but when my parents want me to do shopping for the things they want, I always make a list to not forget. Uh, so I I don't make a list for myself.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, I make a list for my fork, specially when it's about study I make. At timetable to be to work at organize it so it helps me too. To manage my time.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
In my opinion, lazy people don't want to make a list. Uh, I think people who don't make a list, they are not well organized person. So I think the. Uhm. So.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always get my phone with me. I want put to somewhere so anyway so I can't forget. Sings when my phone is with me and I will do.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 65.0提案: Старайтесь избегать повторений и лишних слов, чтобы ответ был более естественным и лаконичным. Также используйте связующие слова для плавности речи.
例: I usually don't make a shopping list for myself, but when I shop for my parents, I always write one to avoid forgetting anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 50.0提案: Обратите внимание на правильное произношение и структуру предложений. Используйте связующие слова, чтобы сделать ответ более связным и понятным.
例: Yes, I make lists for my work, especially when it comes to studying. I organize my timetable, which helps me manage my time effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 40.0提案: Избегайте негативных оценок и старайтесь формулировать мысли более позитивно и структурировано. Используйте связующие слова для логичности.
例: I think some people avoid making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous, or they might find it unnecessary for their routine.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 55.0提案: Старайтесь говорить более чётко и избегать лишних слов. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и стройности ответа.
例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I can't forget my tasks easily.
文法
× Yes, I make a list for my fork, specially when it's about study I make.
✓ Yes, I make a list for my work, especially when it's about study.
The word 'fork' is a typo and should be 'work'. 'Specially' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'especially'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; simplifying it improves clarity.
× At timetable to be to work at organize it so it helps me too.
✓ I organize my timetable to help me work, so it helps me too.
The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. Reordering and adding necessary words clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.
× To manage my time.
✓ It helps me to manage my time.
The original fragment lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'It helps me to' completes the sentence and corrects the structure.
× I want put to somewhere so anyway so I can't forget.
✓ I want to put it somewhere so that I can't forget.
The original sentence is missing the object pronoun 'it' after 'put' and has awkward phrasing. Adding 'it' and restructuring improves clarity and correctness.
× Sings when my phone is with me and I will do.
✓ Since my phone is with me, I will do it.
The original sentence is unclear and contains a typo ('Sings' instead of 'Since'). Correcting the typo and restructuring the sentence clarifies the meaning.
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