List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤り（"thinks"は"things"）や表現の自然さに改善の余地があります。また、理由を述べる際により具体的な例を加えると良いでしょう。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because without it, I tend to buy unnecessary items. For example, last week I bought extra snacks that I didn't need, which wasted my money.

提案: 文法の誤り（"Is I"は"I"）、表現の不自然さが目立ちます。回答は質問に答えていますが、より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、接続詞を使って論理的に話すと良いでしょう。

例: Yes, I make a list every morning before I start work. It helps me organize my tasks clearly and keeps my mind focused throughout the day.

提案: 回答が不完全で文法的にも誤りがあります（"makes"は"make"）。理由をもっと具体的に述べ、接続詞を使って文をつなげると自然になります。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find writing tedious and prefer to focus only on the tasks immediately in front of them.

提案: 時制の誤り（"preferred"は"prefer"）や文法の誤り（"mistake's"は"mistakes"）があります。理由を述べる際に比較の表現を正しく使い、より自然な英語にしましょう。

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's easier to erase mistakes compared to using my phone.

× Yes I do, it's because if I don't make a list when I show up I tend to buy too much thinks that's actually unnecessary.

✓ Yes I do, it's because if I don't make a list when I show up I tend to buy too many things that are actually unnecessary.

The word 'thinks' is incorrect; the correct plural form is 'things'. Also, 'too much' is used with uncountable nouns, but 'things' is countable, so 'too many' should be used instead.

× Is I make a list for my work? Every day when I start working in the morning and it works very well because it shows very clear that what I have to do for the day and it makes my mind clear too.

✓ I make a list for my work every day when I start working in the morning and it works very well because it clearly shows what I have to do for the day and it makes my mind clear too.

The original sentence starts with 'Is I make a list', which is incorrect sentence structure. It should be a statement, not a question. Also, 'shows very clear that' is incorrect; it should be 'clearly shows'. The sentence was fragmented and needed restructuring for clarity.

× They may not like writing and then makes things clearly.

✓ They may not like writing and then make things clear.

The subject 'They' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. Also, 'clearly' is an adverb, but here the adjective 'clear' is appropriate to describe 'things'.

× I preferred to make a list on paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper.

The question is about a general preference, so the present tense 'prefer' should be used instead of the past tense 'preferred'.

× It's because it's easier to erase when you make a mistake's on the list comparing to making a list on your phone.

✓ It's because it's easier to erase when you make mistakes on the list compared to making a list on your phone.

The word 'mistake's' is incorrect; the apostrophe is unnecessary. Also, 'comparing to' should be 'compared to' for correct comparison structure.