List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và phát âm để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember everything I need and avoid buying unnecessary items. This way, I save time and shop more efficiently.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu có cấu trúc đúng để truyền đạt ý hiệu quả.

例: I sometimes make a list for my studies because it helps me stay organized and manage my time efficiently. For example, a detailed list reminds me of all the tasks and assignments I need to complete, preventing me from forgetting important things.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng câu đơn giản và từ vựng phù hợp.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming. They prefer to remember things naturally rather than writing everything down. Also, some think that making lists can make their day feel stressful.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi từ vựng.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient. I always have my phone with me, so I can easily add or check tasks anytime. For example, when I'm out shopping, I can quickly update my list without carrying paper.

× This help me remember everything I need to buy an avoid ssaying unnecessary items an yeah when I when I go to shop I don't waste time to remember everything.

✓ This helps me remember everything I need to buy and avoid saying unnecessary items, and yeah, when I go shopping, I don't waste time trying to remember everything.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'This' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'avoid ssaying' is a typo and should be 'avoid saying'. 'When I go to shop' should be 'when I go shopping' to use the correct verb form after 'go'. 'To remember' should be 'trying to remember' for correct verb usage.

× I sometimes make a list for my study because I think is her me to stay overnight and moneyed my time efficiently.

✓ I sometimes make a list for my study because I think it helps me to stay organized and manage my time efficiently.

The phrase 'is her me' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps me'. 'Stay overnight' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is likely 'stay organized'. 'Moneyed my time' is a misuse; the correct phrase is 'manage my time'.

× For example, having a detailed list remind me of all the tasks an assignment I need to complete an prevent me from forgetting all the important things.

✓ For example, having a detailed list reminds me of all the tasks and assignments I need to complete and prevents me from forgetting all the important things.

The verb 'remind' should be 'reminds' to agree with the singular subject 'having a detailed list'. 'An assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match 'all the tasks'. 'Prevent' should be 'prevents' to agree with the singular subject.

× Some people don't like making less because they fired time-consuming from they might prefer to remember fast naturally it rather than writing everything down, and it should at least Some people think this make their day field to reject an stressful.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming; they might prefer to remember things naturally rather than writing everything down. At least some people think this makes their day feel less stressful.

'Making less' should be 'making lists' (plural). 'Fired' is incorrect; it should be 'find'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs to be split for clarity. 'Make their day field to reject an stressful' is incorrect; it should be 'makes their day feel less stressful'. Subject-verb agreement and word choice errors are corrected.

× I'm I gravitated to word making less on my phone because it very convenient.

✓ I gravitate towards making lists on my phone because it is very convenient.

'I'm I gravitated to word making less' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'I gravitate towards making lists'. 'Less' should be 'lists'. 'It very convenient' needs the verb 'is'.

× I always have my phone with me so I can easily add or check task anytime in any way.

✓ I always have my phone with me so I can easily add or check tasks anytime and anywhere.

'Check task' should be 'check tasks' (plural) to match the context. 'Anytime in any way' is awkward; 'anytime and anywhere' is more natural.

× For example when I'm out shopping I can quickly update my list without carrying a try paper.

✓ For example, when I'm out shopping, I can quickly update my list without carrying a piece of paper.

'Try paper' is incorrect; it should be 'a piece of paper'. Also, commas are added for clarity.