List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'fall it anything' nên là 'forget anything' và 'building unnecessary items' nên là 'buying unnecessary items'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời nên mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I want to make sure that I don't forget anything I need to buy. This way, I can avoid buying unnecessary items and save both time and money.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ 'make the lid' nên là 'make a list', 'brevity's important works' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp.

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me concentrate and prioritize important tasks. This way, I can save time and work more effectively.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá ngắn và chưa rõ ràng. Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích thêm lý do và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it's unnecessary. They prefer to browse freely and enjoy the shopping experience without restrictions.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng như 'I thing is more convenience' nên là 'I think it is more convenient'. Bạn nên nối các câu lại để tránh lặp từ và làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I prefer to make my list on my phone because I think it is more convenient. I can check it anytime, and it can send me reminders, which is really helpful.

× I always make a list when I shop because I want to make sure that I don't fall it anything.

✓ I always make a list when I shop because I want to make sure that I don't forget anything.

The phrase 'fall it anything' is incorrect. The correct verb phrase is 'forget anything' to express failing to remember something.

× I need to buy.

✓ I need to buy things.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'buy'. Adding 'things' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× This way I can avoid building unnecessary items and save time and money.

✓ This way I can avoid buying unnecessary items and save time and money.

The verb 'building' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'buying' items, which fits the context of shopping.

× Yes, I always make the lid for my work because I want to concentrate on my work and brevity's important works.

✓ Yes, I always make the list for my work because I want to concentrate on my work and brevity is important for work.

'Lid' is a typo for 'list'. Also, 'brevity's important works' is incorrect; it should be 'brevity is important for work' to convey the intended meaning.

× To save time. Anne work effectively.

✓ To save time and work effectively.

The original is fragmented and unclear. Combining into one sentence with 'and' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I refer to my list on my phone because I thing is more convenience.

✓ I refer to my list on my phone because I think it is more convenient.

'Thing' should be 'think', and 'convenience' (noun) should be 'convenient' (adjective) to correctly describe the list.

× Because I can check it anytime in it can send me reminder which is really helpful.

✓ Because I can check it anytime and it can send me reminders which are really helpful.

The conjunction 'and' is needed instead of 'in' to connect clauses. Also, 'reminder' should be plural 'reminders' to match the context.