List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ немного длинный и местами неструктурированный. Постарайтесь отвечать более естественно и связно, используя связующие слова для логичности. Также избегайте повторений и старайтесь быть конкретнее в деталях.

例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I shop spontaneously during the day. However, I realize it's helpful since I often forget items and end up shopping multiple times. Therefore, I plan to start making lists to be more organized.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и неполные предложения, что снижает его естественность и понятность. Рекомендуется использовать полные предложения и более разнообразную лексику, а также связующие слова для плавности речи.

例: Yes, I always make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and focused. For example, I can check off tasks once completed, which reduces my stress and increases productivity.

提案: Ответ не полностью завершён и содержит повторения. Постарайтесь формулировать мысли чётко и завершённо, избегая тавтологии. Добавьте конкретные причины и примеры для обогащения ответа.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they don't see the benefits or find it hard to organize their thoughts in one place. For instance, they may prefer spontaneous planning over structured lists.

提案: Ответ содержит много ошибок и неясных выражений, что затрудняет понимание. Рекомендуется улучшить произношение и грамматику, а также использовать более точные слова и связки для ясности.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because I can see them easily and refer to them anytime. Using my phone can be distracting due to notifications and other apps.

× And then usually I shop. Unpredictably during the day, so it's really hard to keep this note.

✓ And then usually I shop unpredictably during the day, so it's really hard to keep this note.

The sentence was split incorrectly, causing a sentence fragment. Combining the two parts into one sentence with correct punctuation improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So looks like I have to put myself together and start doing it.

✓ So it looks like I have to put myself together and start doing it.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' before 'looks like'. Including 'it' is necessary for correct sentence structure and meaning.

× I always make such list for my work because it helps me to stay organized and attentive and I find it really beneficial since I can simply take off AH once it's done and.

✓ I always make such a list for my work because it helps me to stay organized and attentive and I find it really beneficial since I can simply take off an item once it's done.

The phrase 'such list' requires an article 'a' before 'list'. Also, 'take off AH' is unclear; replacing it with 'take off an item' clarifies the meaning.

× This method very.

✓ This method is very effective.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb and complement. Adding 'is very effective' completes the sentence and conveys the intended meaning.

× So I think that a lot of people just don't see any benefits of making such lists or they can't organize themselves to put it all at one place in order to not to.

✓ So I think that a lot of people just don't see any benefits of making such lists or they can't organize themselves to put it all in one place in order not to.

The correct preposition is 'in one place' rather than 'at one place'. Also, 'in order to not to' is incorrect; it should be 'in order not to' without 'to' after 'not'.

× I prefer making lists on paper because I can keep it in front of my site and I can easily go back to this at any moment.

✓ I prefer making lists on paper because I can keep it in front of my sight and I can easily go back to this at any moment.

The word 'site' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'sight', meaning the field of vision.

× And with fan keeping your note said phone, it can be distracted because it's easily to get distracted by a lot of notifications or an extremely spontaneous urge to chew.

✓ And when keeping your notes on your phone, you can be distracted because it's easy to get distracted by a lot of notifications or an extremely spontaneous urge to chew.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'fan' should be 'when'; 'note said phone' should be 'notes on your phone'; 'it can be distracted' should be 'you can be distracted'; 'it's easily to get distracted' should be 'it's easy to get distracted'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.