List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains grammatical errors and lacks linking words. Try to form a complete sentence and add a reason to support your answer for more effectiveness. For example, use 'because' to explain why making a list is helpful.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy.

提案: Your answer has several pronunciation and grammatical mistakes, and the meaning is unclear. Please try to speak clearly and use correct vocabulary. Also, structure your answer with a topic sentence and supporting details using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me remember important tasks and complete my assignments on time.

提案: Your answer is difficult to understand due to pronunciation and grammar errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. For example, explain that some people dislike making lists because it takes time and they may run out of time to complete them.

例: Some people don't like making lists because it takes time to write them, and sometimes they feel pressured if they cannot finish everything on the list.

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains unclear phrases. Try to avoid redundancy and organise your answer logically using linking words like 'because' and 'so'. Also, use correct vocabulary and sentence structure.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient than using pen and paper, so I can easily add or remove items whenever I want.

× Yeah, I usually make a list when I go to shop and it really helpful for me.

✓ Yeah, I usually make a list when I go shopping and it is really helpful for me.

The phrase 'go to shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' which uses the gerund form after 'go' to indicate the activity. Also, the sentence lacks the verb 'is' before 'really helpful', which is necessary to link the subject and adjective.

× Oh yeah, I make, I always make a lid for my walk and help me to remember, remember important things to do and Remember Me to do assignments.

✓ Oh yeah, I always make a list for my work and it helps me to remember important things to do and reminds me to do assignments.

The word 'lid' should be 'list', and 'walk' should be 'work'. Also, 'help me' should be 'helps me' to agree with the singular subject 'list'. 'Remember Me' should be 'reminds me' to correctly express the action.

× Yeah, some people don't like don't like making legs becaused make a list can take a moment and dating a megalist ran out of time.

✓ Yeah, some people don't like making lists because making a list can take a moment and they might run out of time.

The phrase 'making legs' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists'. 'Becaused' is a misspelling of 'because'. The sentence structure is confusing; 'dating a megalist ran out of time' is unclear and corrected to 'they might run out of time' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer making a list on my phone 'cause my phone because it is convenient to use Wells on paper.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because it is more convenient to use than paper.

The phrase 'Wells on paper' is incorrect and unclear. The correct comparison uses 'more convenient to use than paper'. Also, 'cause my phone because' is redundant; 'because' alone suffices.

× We need a pen and paper days. So Billy, I think so I prefer on phone.

✓ We need pen and paper these days. So, basically, I think I prefer using my phone.

'We need a pen and paper days' is incorrect; it should be 'We need pen and paper these days' to indicate the current time. 'So Billy' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'So basically'. Also, 'I prefer on phone' should be 'I prefer using my phone' for grammatical correctness.