List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and does not directly respond to the question. Try to answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. For example, say whether you make a list when shopping and explain why or why not.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

提案: Your response repeats the question instead of answering it. You should provide a clear answer and explain if making lists at work is effective for you. Use linking words to add details.

例: Yes, I often make lists for my work tasks, and it works well because it helps me stay organised and complete my duties on time.

提案: You repeated the question incorrectly instead of answering it. Try to give reasons why some people might dislike making lists, using specific details and linking words.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally, which can sometimes be more flexible.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. You should clearly state your preference and explain why, using linking words to connect your ideas.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit or add items whenever I need to.

× Do you make a this for you shot?

✓ Do you make a list for your shop?

The original sentence has incorrect word order and uses 'this' and 'shot' incorrectly, which makes it unclear. The corrected sentence rearranges the words to form a proper question relevant to the context, using 'list' and 'shop' appropriately.

× Do you make a list? For you at work, doesn't it work?

✓ Do you make a list for your work? Doesn't it work?

The original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect word order. Combining the two parts into one coherent question improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Why does some people like making lists?

✓ Why do some people like making lists?

The subject 'some people' is plural, so the verb should be 'do' instead of 'does' to agree in number.

× To your paper to make a list on paper. Or your phone.

✓ Do you prefer to make a list on paper or on your phone?

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a clear structure. The corrected sentence forms a proper question matching the examiner's question, improving clarity and grammatical correctness.