List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在较多错误，建议练习简单句型表达，避免重复和不必要的词汇。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and saves time.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少连贯的句子结构，建议使用完整句子并明确说明理由。

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks and ensures I don't forget important things.

提案: 表达混乱，句子不完整，建议练习用简单句表达观点，并提供具体原因。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it complicated or time-consuming.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和不连贯的表达，建议练习正确的句子结构和词汇使用。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can check it anytime to remember my tasks.

× Yes, I will make a list, woman. I sure because I I will ensure. What things I will buy?

✓ Yes, I make a list. I am sure because I will ensure what things I will buy.

这里的错误是模态动词使用不当。学生使用了多余的“will”，导致句子不通顺。建议简化句子，正确使用现在时和将来时的搭配。

× Yes. I will make a list for my work because I think he's very. Benefit for me. And they will know what, since I really do.

✓ Yes. I make a list for my work because I think it's very beneficial for me. And they will know what I really do.

这里“will make”应改为一般现在时“make”，因为是习惯动作。'he's very. Benefit'应为'it's very beneficial'，形容词使用错误。

× I think some people think that is very difficult and is very complex, so they don't like making lists and maybe maybe easy will. Don't do. Who is the least?

✓ I think some people think that it is very difficult and very complex, so they don't like making lists and maybe they just don't do it easily.

句子中“maybe maybe easy will. Don't do.”结构混乱，模态动词和副词使用错误。应调整句子结构，使其符合英语表达习惯。

× Yes, I like make a list around the. On my phone because I think he's very calm. Convenient and. I can always know what should I do.

✓ Yes, I like to make a list on my phone because I think it's very convenient. I can always know what I should do.

“like make”应为“like to make”，动词不定式用法错误。'he's very calm. Convenient'表达不当，应为'it's very convenient'。句子断裂，需连贯表达。