List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有點不自然，且有語言錯誤，建議你使用簡單且正確的句子來表達，例如避免使用錯誤的詞彙和語法。

例: Yes, I always prepare a shopping list before I go shopping because it helps me save time and avoid buying unnecessary things.

提案: 你的回答不完整且語句不通順，建議你用完整的句子回答問題，並且清楚說明你的做法和感受。

例: Yes, I make a to-do list before the day starts. It helps me organize and prioritize my tasks effectively.

提案: 你的回答不清楚且有很多語言錯誤，建議你先思考清楚再回答，並用簡單明確的句子表達你的想法。

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to do things spontaneously and feel that making lists wastes time.

提案: 你的回答語句不完整且不連貫，建議你用完整句子說明你的偏好並解釋原因。

例: I usually make my lists on my phone using Google Calendar because I have many meetings during the day and it helps me keep track of them on time.

× I will prepare a checklist before I go to shopping every time.

✓ I will prepare a checklist before I go shopping every time.

The verb 'go' is followed by the base form of the verb without 'to' when indicating an activity, so 'go shopping' is correct, not 'go to shopping'.

× This is because preparing a shopping list in elephants help me out self lots of time and also avoid impossible Ivy buying.

✓ This is because preparing a shopping list helps me save a lot of time and also avoid impossible buying.

The original sentence contains nonsensical words ('in elephants', 'out self', 'impossible Ivy buying') and incorrect verb agreement. The corrected sentence uses proper verb agreement and clearer wording to convey the intended meaning.

× I will shut down the will To Do List before a date begins every time.

✓ I will check the To Do List before the day begins every time.

The phrase 'shut down the will To Do List' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'check the To Do List'. Also, 'a date' should be 'the day' to refer to the current day.

× Categorize my task. And.

✓ I categorize my tasks.

The original is a sentence fragment and lacks a subject and verb. The corrected sentence is complete and grammatically correct.

× I am not Intel in entirely sure, but I would say that some people prefer to have layer print spontaneously and lame I think.

✓ I am not entirely sure, but I would say that some people prefer to act spontaneously and lazily, I think.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect words ('Intel in', 'layer print', 'lame'). The correction replaces them with appropriate words and corrects pronoun usage.

× Riding the. To Do List before him. West Time.

✓ Writing the To Do List before helps save time.

The original is fragmented and unclear. The correction forms a complete sentence conveying the intended meaning.

× Are usually Mac, the list, Michael, Calendar.

✓ I usually make the list on my calendar.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words ('Are usually Mac', 'Michael'). The correction uses correct pronouns and vocabulary.

× Less is because I have a lot of a meeting your day Ann.

✓ This is because I have a lot of meetings during the day.

The original sentence has incorrect pronouns and articles ('Less', 'a meeting your day Ann'). The correction uses proper pronouns and plural forms.

× If I can make a list on Google Calendar I can check it's on time.

✓ If I make a list on Google Calendar, I can check it on time.

The original sentence uses 'it's' (it is) incorrectly instead of the object pronoun 'it'. Also, 'can make' is better as 'make' to indicate habitual action.