List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to speak more clearly and use correct vocabulary. Instead of 'ileus' and 'stink', say 'lists' and 'panic'. Also, make your answer more natural and coherent by linking ideas properly.

例: Yes, I usually make a list whenever I go shopping so that I am prepared and won't panic or forget anything I need to buy.

提案: Focus on clear pronunciation and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain how you organize your work tasks effectively.

例: Now that I am getting used to my work, I no longer make lists, but I do pin important emails so I can prioritize tasks and avoid forgetting anything.

提案: Use correct vocabulary and avoid filler words. Explain your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your thoughts.

例: I am not sure, but maybe some people prefer not to make lists because they like to go with the flow and are more spontaneous.

提案: Improve pronunciation and sentence fluency. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and avoid fragmented sentences.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and easier to read.

× Yes, I am making ileus whenever I shop so.

✓ Yes, I make lists whenever I shop.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'am making' and the word 'ileus' which seems to be a typo for 'lists'. The verb 'make' is more appropriate in simple present tense to express habitual action. Use 'make lists' instead of 'am making ileus'.

× I am prepared and will not. Stink. And prevent. Forgetting something that I need to buy.

✓ I am prepared and will not forget or miss anything that I need to buy.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Will not stink' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo for 'will not forget'. Also, 'prevent forgetting' is awkward here. The corrected sentence clearly expresses the intended meaning in proper structure.

× Now that I am getting used to my work, I. And no longer Mceliece. Uhm. But I do pinning. US e-mail so I can. Prioritize what is important and. Not forget about it.

✓ Now that I am getting used to my work, I no longer make lists. But I do pin emails so I can prioritize what is important and not forget about it.

The original sentence contains unclear words like 'Mceliece' and 'pinning' which seem to be misheard or misspelled. 'Make lists' is the correct phrase. 'Pin emails' is used correctly here. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I am not sure about that, but maybe some people. Prefer not to metolius because they just want to go with the flow and they really are just a sponte person.

✓ I am not sure about that, but maybe some people prefer not to make lists because they just want to go with the flow and they are really just spontaneous people.

'Metolius' is a mishearing of 'make lists'. 'Sponte person' should be 'spontaneous people'. Also, plural 'people' matches with 'are'. The sentence is corrected for proper word choice and agreement.

× I preferred to Miko Lee's on my phone because it is more convenient and. An it is easier. To read about. It.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and easier to read.

The original sentence uses 'preferred' which is past tense, but the context suggests present preference, so 'prefer' is correct. 'Miko Lee's' is a mishearing of 'make lists'. The sentence is corrected for tense and clarity.