List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ содержит много повторений и нечетких выражений, таких как "like" и "some kind of". Рекомендуется использовать более точные и естественные фразы, избегать лишних слов и структурировать ответ более логично.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my phone before traveling. I include essential items like clothes and skincare products for my vacation. This helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

提案: Ответ неясен и содержит грамматические ошибки, а также неполные мысли. Следует отвечать более чётко, использовать связующие слова и завершать предложения, чтобы сделать ответ понятным и логичным.

例: I have tried making work lists, but they don't help me much. I prefer to handle tasks as they come instead of planning everything at once because long lists can feel overwhelming.

提案: Ответ понятен, но можно улучшить связность и точность выражений. Используйте более формальные и точные слова, а также добавьте связующие слова для плавности.

例: Some people dislike making lists because, like me, they feel stressed and less motivated when they see a long list of tasks. This can make starting work more difficult.

提案: Ответ содержит повторения и нечеткие выражения. Рекомендуется использовать более точные слова, избегать лишних слов и структурировать ответ с помощью связующих слов для ясности.

例: It depends on the situation. For grocery shopping, I prefer writing a list on paper and sticking it on my refrigerator as a reminder. For other tasks, I use my phone because it's more convenient and sends me notifications.

× I like make a list at at my phone and just like write some kind of things that I should board

✓ I like making a list on my phone and just writing some kinds of things that I should bring

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing preferences. Also, 'make' and 'write' need to be in '-ing' form after 'like'. Additionally, 'board' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'bring' for items to take along.

× I like make a list at at my phone

✓ I like making a list on my phone

The correct preposition to use with 'phone' in this context is 'on', not 'at'. 'On my phone' indicates using the phone as a device to make the list.

× just like write some kind of things that I should board

✓ just like write some kinds of things that I should bring

The phrase 'some kind of things' is incorrect; it should be 'some kinds of things' to match plural 'things'. Also, 'board' is incorrect; 'bring' is the correct verb for carrying items.

× it is really help me too

✓ it really helps me too

The verb 'help' needs to be in the third person singular present tense 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'is' is unnecessary here.

× So once I there, but it didn't help me like to be honest

✓ So once I was there, it didn't help me, to be honest

The sentence is missing the verb 'was' after 'I' to form a complete clause. Also, 'but' is unnecessary and disrupts sentence flow.

× I think I more prefer do something like simultaneously rather than like a ride layout of my like work

✓ I think I prefer to do something simultaneously rather than write a list of my work

The phrase 'more prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' alone suffices. 'Do something like simultaneously' is awkward; 'do something simultaneously' is correct. 'Ride layout' is incorrect; it should be 'write a list'. Also, 'like' is overused and unnecessary.

× when I wrote it, I like just say how many things I should do an it's like seems to be so exhausting

✓ when I wrote it, I just said how many things I should do and it seemed so exhausting

The verb 'like' is incorrectly used here; it should be omitted. Also, tense consistency requires past tense 'said' and 'seemed' to match 'wrote'.

× As a result, I began

✓ As a result, I gave up

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'I began' needs an object or complement to make sense. 'I gave up' fits the context better.

× Maybe because they are also, like me, more feel stressed and less motivated to start when they see the list of things that they should do

✓ Maybe because they, like me, feel more stressed and less motivated to start when they see the list of things they should do

The phrase 'more feel stressed' is incorrect; 'feel more stressed' is correct. Also, commas are needed around 'like me' for clarity.

× I could write it on the paper and put it on my refrigerator, just remind myself

✓ I could write it on paper and put it on my refrigerator to remind myself

The phrase 'on the paper' is less natural than 'on paper' in this context. Also, 'just remind myself' is incomplete; 'to remind myself' is correct.

× But some kind of other tasks, I more prefer to write out my phone

✓ But for some other tasks, I prefer to write on my phone

The phrase 'some kind of other tasks' is awkward; 'some other tasks' is better. 'I more prefer' is incorrect; 'I prefer' suffices. 'Write out my phone' is incorrect; 'write on my phone' is correct.

× It's more convenient and just like I could remind also myself like Violet work

✓ It's more convenient and I can also remind myself about work

The phrase 'remind also myself like Violet work' is unclear and incorrect. 'Remind myself about work' is correct. 'Like Violet work' seems to be a mishearing or error and is omitted.