List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有語法錯誤和不連貫的表達，建議你練習使用完整且連貫的句子，並避免不必要的停頓。可以嘗試先給出明確的主題句，然後用具體的細節支持你的回答。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I try to remember what I need. However, sometimes I forget to buy some items.

提案: 回答中句子結構不完整且表達不清楚，建議你練習用完整句子說明原因，並使用連接詞使語句更流暢。

例: Yes, I make a list for my work, but it doesn't always help because I often avoid following it.

提案: 你的回答有語法錯誤，且表達不夠清晰。建議你練習用正確的語法和連接詞來組織句子，並提供更具體的理由。

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they think it is too complicated, so they prefer to remember things in their mind.

提案: 你的回答比較完整且有清楚的理由，但可以增加更多細節和連接詞，使回答更豐富和流暢。

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very convenient; I don't need to carry a pen or paper, and I can easily edit the list whenever I want.

× I don't make a list when I'm. Hi, Shep. Because. I remember my legs in my mind, but. Usually I will forget something that. I need to buy.

✓ I don't make a list when I shop because I remember my legs in my mind, but usually I forget something that I need to buy.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incomplete thoughts. The phrase 'when I'm. Hi, Shep.' is unclear and likely a transcription error. The sentence should be combined into a coherent statement to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I remember my legs in my mind, but.

✓ I remember my lists in my mind, but

The word 'legs' is likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'lists'. Using the correct noun is essential for clarity. Pronouns and nouns must accurately reflect the intended meaning.

× I do a list for my work.

✓ I make a list for my work.

The verb 'do' is incorrectly used with 'a list'. The correct collocation is 'make a list'. Using appropriate verb-noun combinations is important for grammatical accuracy.

× But. It doesn't work because I don't want to. Go through the list.

✓ But it doesn't work because I don't want to go through the list.

The sentence is fragmented with unnecessary periods. Also, 'go' should not be capitalized after 'to'. Modal verb 'don't want to' should be followed by the base form of the verb without capitalization.

× Making a list for work or for shopping is. To complicate to do it so they just. Remember in their mind.

✓ Making a list for work or shopping is too complicated to do, so they just remember it in their mind.

The phrase 'to complicate to do it' is incorrect; the correct form is 'too complicated to do'. Also, 'remember in their mind' should be 'remember it in their mind' for clarity. Proper adjective forms and sentence structure are necessary.