List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более связным и грамматически правильным. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и избегайте повторений. Например, объясните, почему список помогает вам не забывать вещи и экономит время.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go because I tend to forget things easily. Moreover, having a list saves me time as I don't have to think too much while shopping, and it prevents me from making extra trips to the store.

提案: Ответ неясен и содержит много ошибок. Следует структурировать ответ, начать с прямого утверждения, затем объяснить, как список помогает планировать день, используя связующие слова.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work every day, and it definitely helps me. In the morning, I plan my tasks for the day, which allows me to manage my time effectively within 24 hours.

提案: Ответ должен быть более понятным и логичным. Объясните, почему некоторые люди считают, что списки тратят время, и приведите причину, например, хорошая память.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they think it wastes time. I believe this is true for those who have a good memory and feel it's unnecessary to write down every task.

提案: Ответ содержит много ошибок и неясностей. Следует ясно выразить предпочтение и объяснить причины, используя связующие слова и правильную грамматику.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me. Also, I might forget paper lists or lose them, so using my phone is more convenient.

× Yes, I make the list before going shopping because I have.

✓ Yes, I make the list before going shopping because I have to.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the necessary modal verb 'to' after 'have' to express obligation. The phrase 'I have' should be 'I have to' to indicate necessity.

× It also saves me time without overthinking and it helps me avoid going back to buy it himself.

✓ It also saves me time without overthinking and it helps me avoid going back to buy it again.

The pronoun 'himself' is incorrectly used to refer to an object. Instead, 'again' is appropriate to indicate repetition of the action.

× Yes, of course it works when I make a list of my whole days to do more over in the morning time I faced work is for day to make a plan of what sing a division in 24 hours.

✓ Yes, of course it works when I make a list of my whole day's tasks in the morning to plan how to divide my time over 24 hours.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs restructuring for clarity and correct expression of time management.

× Some people think that it just inversed of time and I believe it is.

✓ Some people think that it is just a waste of time and I believe so too.

The word 'inversed' is incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'a waste of time'. Also, 'I believe it is' is better expressed as 'I believe so too' for agreement.

× Is this as the ones who are good at remembering things so they will set it is not worth making note of each and every eight time remember things.

✓ This is because those who are good at remembering things think it is not worth making a note of every little thing.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun usage and unclear phrasing. 'Is this as the ones' should be 'This is because those', and 'eight time remember things' is nonsensical and corrected to 'every little thing'.

× I prefer to make a list of all important IT times on my mobile because this is a device which I always keep with myself and on top of is it another important reason I like.

✓ I prefer to make a list of all important items on my mobile because it is a device I always keep with me, and another important reason is that I like it.

The phrase 'keep with myself' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'keep with me'. Also, 'on top of is it another important reason I like' is awkward and rephrased for clarity.

× I can forget the paper or it can be dimension.

✓ I can forget the paper or it can be damaged.

The word 'dimension' is incorrect in this context; likely the intended meaning is 'damaged' or 'lost'. The pronoun 'it' correctly refers to 'paper'.

× So that's why I pray.

✓ So that's why I prefer it.

The word 'pray' is incorrect here; likely a typo for 'prefer'. The sentence is corrected to express preference logically.