List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas. Use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping, especially for groceries with my brother. It helps us buy everything we need efficiently and saves time. Therefore, I prefer making a list to stay organized and avoid forgetting items.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear sentences. Focus on using correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid repetition and try to explain how making lists helps your productivity with linking words.

例: Yes, I like to make a list for my work every morning. It outlines my daily routine and tasks, which helps me stay productive and reduces stress. Because of this, I can manage my time better and complete my work efficiently.

提案: Your answer has relevant ideas but is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to express your points more clearly and avoid starting sentences with conjunctions like 'And'. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and finish your thoughts fully.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and go with the flow. Additionally, writing tasks down can create pressure to complete them quickly, which they might find stressful.

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Use clearer expressions and correct grammar. Also, explain your preference with linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: I use both paper and phone for making lists, but I prefer using my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can easily access and update my lists anytime and anywhere.

× It make it easy for us to buy things and time saving for us.

✓ It makes it easy for us to buy things and saves time for us.

The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make' to agree in number. Also, 'time saving' should be corrected to 'saves time' to form a proper verb phrase.

× So definitely I go for a making a list and by the cross reason and other things.

✓ So definitely I go for making a list and buying the groceries and other things.

The phrase 'go for a making a list' is incorrect; 'go for making a list' is correct. Also, 'by the cross reason' is unclear and likely a mishearing or misphrasing; 'buying the groceries' fits the context better.

× Usually I likes to make a list about my all hours routine.

✓ Usually I like to make a list about my entire daily routine.

The subject 'I' requires the base form 'like' not 'likes'. Also, 'all hours routine' is awkward; 'entire daily routine' is clearer.

× I like to write on the paper every day in the morning, but I am going to do in the whole day.

✓ I like to write on paper every morning what I am going to do throughout the day.

The original sentence is awkward and incomplete. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects the structure.

× It it makes my more productive and makes me relief of about my work.

✓ It makes me more productive and relieves me about my work.

'Makes my more productive' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me more productive'. 'Makes me relief of about my work' is incorrect; 'relieves me about my work' or better 'relieves my stress about my work' is appropriate.

× I I also like to me.

✓ I also like to do that.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction completes the thought logically.

× And there would be a different reason why people don't like to make their list about the things they want to do it.

✓ There are different reasons why people don't like to make lists about the things they want to do.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is often unnecessary. 'There would be a different reason' is awkward; 'There are different reasons' is clearer and more natural. Also, 'make their list about the things they want to do it' is redundant; 'make lists about the things they want to do' is correct.

× Maybe they don't want to mention it on the paper, they just want to go with the flow and do their things.

✓ Maybe they don't want to write it on paper; they just want to go with the flow and do their things.

'Mention it on the paper' is awkward; 'write it on paper' is more appropriate. Also, a semicolon or period is needed to separate the two independent clauses.

× If they write it, it would be pressure on them to finish it as soon as possible.

✓ If they write it, it puts pressure on them to finish it as soon as possible.

'It would be pressure on them' is awkward; 'it puts pressure on them' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× And that is.

✓ And that is why.

The sentence is incomplete; adding 'why' completes the thought.

× Actually I choose both methods easy, but if I have to go for I would like to go for a phone as I can carry my phone every time wherever I go.

✓ Actually, I find both methods easy, but if I have to choose, I would like to use my phone because I can carry it with me wherever I go.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and missing words. 'Choose both methods easy' should be 'find both methods easy'. 'If I have to go for' is incomplete; 'if I have to choose' is correct. 'Go for a phone' should be 'use my phone'. Also, 'carry my phone every time wherever I go' is better as 'carry it with me wherever I go'.

× So I like to use a mobile phone for making a list rather than a paper.

✓ So I like to use a mobile phone to make a list rather than paper.

'For making a list' is less natural than 'to make a list'. Also, 'rather than a paper' should be 'rather than paper' because 'paper' here is uncountable.