List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response with correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'Yes, I sometimes make a list when I shop, but not always.'

例: Yes, I sometimes make a list when I shop, but not always because I usually remember what I need.

提案: Your answer is too brief and does not fully address the question. Provide a complete sentence and explain why it does or does not work. For example, 'I don't usually make lists for work because I prefer to keep tasks in my mind, but sometimes this leads to forgetting things.'

例: I don't usually make lists for work because I prefer to keep tasks in my mind, but sometimes this leads to forgetting things.

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons and use linking words. For example, 'Some people dislike making lists because it takes too much time and they find it boring to write everything down.'

例: Some people dislike making lists because it takes too much time and they find it boring to write everything down.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding more detail and linking words. For example, 'I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient; I can easily open and close the list whenever I need.'

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient; I can easily open and close the list whenever I need.

× Yes, sometime I don't do it, don't do it a lot.

✓ Yes, sometimes I don't do it, don't do it a lot.

The word 'sometime' is incorrect here; the correct adverb is 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Sometime' refers to an unspecified point in time, while 'sometimes' means 'occasionally'.

× Yes, sometime I don't do it, don't do it a lot.

✓ Yes, sometimes I don't do it; I don't do it a lot.

The original sentence is a run-on with two independent clauses joined incorrectly. Using a semicolon or separating into two sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think. Home I don't even know. I don't know why, but is silent so so long to make a list. Unlock following what she buy or stuff like that.

✓ I think... I don't even know. I don't know why, but it is so silent and takes so long to make a list. I just follow what she buys or stuff like that.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Home' seems misplaced. 'Is silent so so long' is ungrammatical; it should be 'it is so silent and takes so long'. 'Unlock following' is unclear; likely intended 'I just follow'. Also, 'she buy' should be 'she buys' (third person singular). These corrections improve sentence structure and clarity.

× Unlock following what she buy or stuff like that.

✓ I just follow what she buys or stuff like that.

The verb 'buy' must agree with the third person singular subject 'she', so it should be 'buys'. Also, 'Unlock following' is incorrect; 'I just follow' fits the context better.