List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan pengucapan agar jawaban terdengar lebih alami dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas tanpa pengulangan yang tidak perlu.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go. I bring small notes with me to remember everything I need and to avoid spending too much money.

提案: Perbaiki penggunaan kata dan tata bahasa agar jawaban lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat kalimat lebih koheren.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work every day. It helps me keep track of all tasks and ensures I meet deadlines on time.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar jawaban lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide dengan baik.

例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it difficult. They prefer a spontaneous approach and rely on memory or intuition to manage their daily activities.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar jawaban lebih alami dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because it's easier to save and I don't lose it easily.

× Yes, I usually take a note before I go shop.

✓ Yes, I usually take notes before I go shopping.

The phrase 'a note' should be plural 'notes' because people usually take multiple notes when making a list. Also, 'go shop' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping' to use the correct verb form after 'go'.

× Sometimes I. Bring some little notes with me to make sure that I that I remember all the list of things that I need to buy and to avoid. Spending too much money.

✓ Sometimes I bring some small notes with me to make sure that I remember the entire list of things that I need to buy and to avoid spending too much money.

The sentence has unnecessary periods and incorrect capitalization. 'Little notes' is better expressed as 'small notes'. 'All the list' should be 'the entire list' for clarity. 'Avoid. Spending' should be 'avoid spending' without a period. The verb 'bring' is correct here but the sentence structure needs correction for fluency.

× I will list down all the activities that need to be done in that day.

✓ I will list down all the activities that need to be done that day.

The phrase 'in that day' is incorrect; it should be 'that day' to indicate the specific day. 'List down' is acceptable but 'list' alone is more natural.

× It helps me to ensure that all the activities will Mitt.

✓ It helps me to ensure that all the activities will meet the deadline.

The word 'Mitt' is a typo and should be 'meet'. Also, 'deadline' is missing and is necessary to complete the meaning.

× In my opinions and people. Dislike making loose because they find it very difficult.

✓ In my opinion, people dislike making lists because they find it very difficult.

'Opinions' should be singular 'opinion' as it refers to the speaker's view. 'Loose' is a typo and should be 'lists'. The sentence also has unnecessary periods that disrupt the flow.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone to a paper because it's easier for me to save it.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because it's easier for me to save it.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used; 'rather than' is the correct phrase to compare preferences. Also, 'a paper' should be just 'paper' as it is uncountable in this context.

× So why I don't lose it easily?

✓ So I don't lose it easily.

The sentence is incorrectly structured as a question with 'why' but the intended meaning is a statement. Removing 'why' corrects the sentence structure.