List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và ngắn gọn.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping, especially if I need to buy many items for my home because I tend to forget things easily.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích hiệu quả của việc làm danh sách với ví dụ cụ thể.

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work and studies. It helps me organize my tasks from morning to evening, so I can manage my time better.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy cố gắng trình bày ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lặp từ.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time, and they believe they can remember their tasks without writing them down.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai. Hãy trả lời rõ ràng và giải thích lý do tại sao bạn thích dùng điện thoại để làm danh sách.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient and I can access it anytime and anywhere.

× I usually make a list when I go to supermarket to buy a loss of accessory or import in multiple things in my house because I very forgetful.

✓ I usually make a list when I go to the supermarket to buy a lot of accessories or important things for my house because I am very forgetful.

The word 'supermarket' needs the definite article 'the' before it. 'Loss' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot' to indicate quantity. 'Accessory' should be plural 'accessories' to match 'a lot of'. 'Import' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'important'. Also, 'I very forgetful' is missing the verb 'am'. These corrections fix singular/plural issues and article usage.

× Yes, I always makes a list for my works on study when a student.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work when I was a student.

The verb 'makes' is incorrect with the subject 'I'; it should be 'make'. 'Works' should be singular 'work' as it refers to tasks or assignments collectively. Also, 'on study when a student' is awkward; it is better to say 'when I was a student' to indicate past time.

× I usually have a plane of from morning to evening to usually do when I free or.

✓ I usually have a plan from morning to evening of what to do when I am free.

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Plane' should be 'plan'. The phrase 'of from morning to evening' is incorrect; it should be 'from morning to evening'. 'To usually do' is misplaced; it should be 'of what to do'. 'When I free or' is incomplete; it should be 'when I am free'. These changes correct sentence structure errors.

× I think uh, they don't have time to make list and they they can remember they want to do in the days in.

✓ I think, uh, they don't have time to make a list and they can remember what they want to do during the day.

The phrase 'make list' needs the article 'a'. The repeated 'they' is redundant. 'They want to do in the days in' is awkward; it should be 'what they want to do during the day'. These corrections fix pronoun and article usage.

× Another reason I think is quite. In Convey.

✓ Another reason, I think, is that it is quite inconvenient.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'In Convey' is incorrect; likely intended 'inconvenient'. Adding 'that it is' clarifies the sentence. This fixes adjective usage and sentence completeness.

× I reform making a list on my phones because it's very convenient to write a loss obtain in a day in you know the I I can easily reach every time when I.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because it's very convenient to write a lot of things to obtain in a day, and I can easily access it anytime.

'Reform' is incorrect; should be 'prefer'. 'On my phones' should be 'on my phone' (singular). 'A loss obtain' is incorrect; should be 'a lot of things to obtain'. 'Reach every time when I' is incomplete; better as 'access it anytime'. These corrections fix preposition and word choice errors.