List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some language errors and awkward phrasing, such as "make Alyssa" and "categorized my list intersections." To improve, use correct vocabulary and sentence structures, for example, say "I usually make a list of the items I need before shopping" and "I categorize my list into sections like fruits, vegetables, and household goods." Also, try to use linking words like "so" or "which helps me" to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I usually make a list of the items I need before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and avoid forgetting anything important. I also categorize my list into sections such as fruits, vegetables, and household goods, which helps me shop more effectively and save time.

提案: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but there are small grammar mistakes like "A to do list" (should be "a to-do list") and "reduces stress" (should be "reduce stress"). To improve, pay attention to article usage and subject-verb agreement. Also, use linking words such as "so" to connect your ideas more naturally.

例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and prioritize my tasks effectively. For example, I write down all the important daily activities so I can finish my work on time and reduce stress.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains errors such as "making less" instead of "making lists" and "takes time and default" which is unclear. To improve, use correct vocabulary and clarify your ideas. For example, say "making a list is an extra task that takes time and effort." Also, use linking words like "because" and "also" properly to connect your points.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they are confident in their memory and believe they can remember everything without writing it down. Also, they think that making a list is an extra task that takes time and effort, which can be inconvenient when they are busy.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant with good use of linking words like "because" and "additionally." To improve further, try to use more varied vocabulary and avoid repeating words like "list" too often. Also, you can add a little more detail to enrich your answer.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I can easily access my notes anytime. Additionally, it's very convenient to add or remove items quickly without worrying about losing the list, which makes shopping or organizing tasks much easier.

× Yes, I usually make Alyssa or the items I need before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and avoid forgetting anything important.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list of the items I need before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and avoid forgetting anything important.

The original sentence contains a word 'Alyssa' which seems to be a typo or incorrect word choice. The correct phrase is 'make a list of the items'. This correction aligns with the intended meaning and proper verb + object structure.

× I also categorized my list intersections like fruits, vegetables, and household goods, which means I can shop more effectively and save time.

✓ I also categorize my list into sections like fruits, vegetables, and household goods, which means I can shop more effectively and save time.

The verb 'categorized' is in past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'categorize' is appropriate. Also, 'intersections' is incorrect; the correct word is 'sections'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I usually make A to do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and prioritize my tasks effectively.

✓ Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and prioritize my tasks effectively.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' to be grammatically correct and standard in English.

× For example, I write down all the important daily activities so I can finish my work on time and reduces stress.

✓ For example, I write down all the important daily activities so I can finish my work on time and reduce stress.

The verb 'reduces' does not agree with the subject 'I'. The correct verb form is 'reduce' to match the subject and maintain parallel structure with 'can finish'.

× Some people don't like making less because they are confident in their memory and believe they can remember everything without writing it down.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they are confident in their memory and believe they can remember everything without writing it down.

The word 'less' is incorrect here; the correct plural noun is 'lists'. This correction fixes the quantifier and noun agreement.

× Also, they think that making a list is an extra task that takes time and default, which can be inconvenient when they are busy.

✓ Also, they think that making a list is an extra task that takes time and effort, which can be inconvenient when they are busy.

The word 'default' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'effort' to express the intended meaning of requiring additional work or energy.