List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "so that items I need before I go shopping" is incomplete and unclear. Also, "which helped me" should be "which helps me" to maintain present tense consistency. Try to use complete sentences and correct verb tenses to make your answer more natural and effective.

例: Yes, I usually make a list of the items I need before I go shopping. I like to organize the list by categories such as fruits, vegetables, and household products, which helps me save time and avoid forgetting anything important.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be improved by adding linking words and more specific details. For example, use "so" or "therefore" to connect ideas smoothly. Also, instead of "other jobs," specify what kind of tasks you focus on to enrich your answer.

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me remember all the important tasks. Therefore, I can complete everything on time, which allows me to focus on other important projects or meetings.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but contains unclear phrases like "race time." It seems you meant "wastes time." Also, try to use linking words such as "because" or "for example" more effectively to improve coherence. Make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and clear.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe they can remember everything without writing it down. They feel that making a list wastes time. For example, when they go shopping, they rely on their memory to buy all the necessary items.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains unclear and repeated words like "Matt Holt" and "using using." These seem to be mistakes. Make sure to proofread your answer to avoid such errors. Also, try to use linking words like "because" and "also" properly to make your answer coherent and natural.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is always with me, so I can easily add or delete items whenever I need to. This method is very convenient. Also, using my phone helps me stay organized without the risk of losing a paper list.

× Yes, I usually make a list so that items I need before I go shopping.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list of items I need before I go shopping.

The original sentence lacks a necessary preposition 'of' after 'list' to correctly link 'items I need' to 'list'. This is a sentence structure error because the sentence is incomplete and unclear without it. Adding 'of' clarifies the relationship between 'list' and 'items'. Suggestion: Always ensure prepositions are correctly used to connect nouns and phrases.

× I like to organize the list by categories such as fruits, vegetables and household products, which helped me save time and avoid forgetting anything important.

✓ I like to organize the list by categories such as fruits, vegetables, and household products, which helps me save time and avoid forgetting anything important.

The sentence uses 'helped' (past tense) incorrectly when the context is present habitual action. The conjunction 'which' refers to the current practice, so the verb should be in present tense 'helps'. This is an incorrect use of conjunction leading to tense inconsistency. Suggestion: Match verb tense with the time frame indicated by the conjunction.

× By doing this I can complete everything on time, which means I save a lot of time to focus on other jobs.

✓ By doing this, I can complete everything on time, which means I save a lot of time to focus on other tasks.

The phrase 'focus on other jobs' is not incorrect grammatically but 'tasks' is more appropriate in this context. Also, a comma is needed after 'By doing this' for clarity. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and punctuation. Suggestion: Use commas after introductory phrases and choose more precise nouns for clarity.

× They feel that making a list is an extra task that race time.

✓ They feel that making a list is an extra task that wastes time.

The phrase 'that race time' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is that making a list wastes time. This is a sentence structure error due to incorrect word choice. Suggestion: Use appropriate verbs to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× This Matt Holt is very convenient.

✓ This method is very convenient.

'Matt Holt' appears to be a typographical error or misused pronoun. The intended word is likely 'method'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns or words. Suggestion: Proofread to avoid typographical errors and ensure correct word usage.

× Also, using using my phone helps me stay organized without the risk of losing a paper list.

✓ Also, using my phone helps me stay organized without the risk of losing a paper list.

The phrase 'using using' is a repetition error. Removing the duplicate 'using' corrects the sentence. This is an incorrect use of prepositions due to repetition. Suggestion: Carefully check for repeated words during writing or editing.