List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が断片的で文法的に不自然な部分があります。より自然で効果的な英語表現を使い、文をつなげて一貫性を持たせることが重要です。例えば、理由を述べる際に接続詞を使い、具体的な内容を明確にしましょう。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I often forget what I need to buy. Making a list helps me stay organized and ensures I don't miss anything important.

提案: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べるために、接続詞を使って文をつなげ、具体的な説明を加えましょう。

例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work because it helps me keep track of my tasks. This method works well as it allows me to prioritize and complete my work efficiently.

提案: 回答が短く、理由の説明が不十分です。より具体的な理由を述べ、文をつなげて自然な英語にしましょう。

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember their tasks mentally. They might find lists unnecessary or time-consuming.

提案: 回答が断片的で不完全です。理由を明確に述べ、文をつなげて自然な表現にしましょう。また、比較の理由を具体的に説明すると良いです。

例: I personally prefer to make lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember better than using my phone. It also feels more tangible and satisfying.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I. Go to shopping.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping.

The sentence has incorrect sentence structure and unnecessary punctuation. 'Go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping' without 'to'. Also, the period after 'I' breaks the sentence unnaturally.

× Because. Actually I don't really remember, Keep my mind.

✓ Because actually, I don't really remember or keep in mind.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks proper connection. 'Because' should not start a sentence alone. 'Keep my mind' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keep in mind'. Also, commas and conjunctions are needed to connect ideas properly.

× What I have to buy?

✓ What I have to buy.

This is a fragment and not a complete sentence. It should be part of a larger sentence or rephrased as a question properly.

× So I usually make a list. Of Sharp.

✓ So I usually make a shopping list.

'Of Sharp' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'shopping list'. Also, the sentence is fragmented and should be combined properly.

× Yes, I usually make a list. White car To Do List.

✓ Yes, I usually make a white car to-do list.

The phrase 'White car To Do List' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. Assuming it means 'white car to-do list', it should be written as a single phrase with proper capitalization and hyphenation.

× Becauses. Then I can check what I have to do.

✓ Because then I can check what I have to do.

'Becauses.' is incorrect; it should be 'Because' without an 's' and connected to the following clause. The sentence should be combined for clarity.

× Before I start my working.

✓ Before I start working.

'My working' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'start working' without 'my'.

× An it works well.

✓ And it works well.

'An' is a typo; it should be 'And' to connect the sentence properly.

× The cause? I can be mined.

✓ The reason is I can be reminded.

'The cause?' is informal and unclear; 'The reason is' is better. 'I can be mined' is incorrect; likely intended 'I can be reminded'.

× I think they can keep their mind what they have to do.

✓ I think they can keep in mind what they have to do.

The phrase 'keep their mind' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'keep in mind'.

× So they don't have to make. List.

✓ So they don't have to make a list.

The sentence is fragmented; 'make. List.' should be combined as 'make a list'.

× I personally prefer to make a list on paper because I feel like. I can remember. More than. ****.

✓ I personally prefer to make a list on paper because I feel like I can remember more than on my phone.

The sentence is fragmented and incomplete. The phrase 'I feel like. I can remember. More than. ****.' should be combined into a complete sentence. 'More than' needs an object, likely 'on my phone'.