List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более связным и грамматически правильным. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и избегайте повторений. Например, начните с утверждения, затем объясните причину, используя простые и понятные предложения.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy. This way, I don't forget important items and I can shop more efficiently.

提案: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки. Следует отвечать прямо на вопрос, используя простые предложения и объясняя причину. Избегайте неясных выражений и старайтесь быть конкретным.

例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to use a planner to organize my tasks. It helps me keep track of my responsibilities better.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Следует использовать связные предложения и объяснять причину более чётко, избегая тавтологии.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it uncomfortable or restrictive. They may prefer to remember things naturally without writing them down.

提案: Ответ неясен и содержит много ошибок. Следует чётко выразить предпочтение и объяснить причину, используя простые и правильные предложения.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and I can easily add or remove items. Also, using a phone is more modern than paper lists.

× Yes, I make a list when I shop because I think that with the list in a shop more.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because I think that with the list, you buy more in a shop.

The original sentence lacks clarity and proper pluralization. 'In a shop more' is incomplete and confusing. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses plural form 'you buy more' to express the idea correctly.

× More comforable because you know what think you could buy? Oh, you can buy in the shop.

✓ It is more comfortable because you know what you can buy in the shop.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains word order errors. The correction restructures the sentence to be grammatically correct and clear.

× I think that some people don't like making list because it like unconfortable for them and they for them it's better not making some lists any lists.

✓ I think that some people don't like making lists because it is uncomfortable for them, and for them, it's better not to make any lists.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' when referring to the general activity. Also, 'like' should be 'is' to correctly link the subject and adjective. The phrase 'not making some lists any lists' is corrected to 'not to make any lists' for clarity and correctness.

× I preferred to make at least on my phone because I think that, uh, make at least on paper is a older thing what can do many people an informed its most popular than paper list.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think that making a list on paper is an older thing; many people are informed and it is more popular than paper lists.

'Preferred' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'prefer'. 'Make at least' is corrected to 'making a list'. 'A older thing' should be 'an older thing' due to vowel sound. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.