List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'As a divorce me' which seems incorrect. Try to make your sentences clear and concise, directly answering the question with a topic sentence followed by supporting details. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store. This helps me remember exactly what I need to buy and keeps me organized.

提案: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using linking words and clearer sentence structure. For example, use 'because' to explain reasons and avoid awkward phrasing like 'saves up my time'. Also, try to be more specific about how the list helps you.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it saves me time and keeps me motivated by reminding me of all the tasks I need to complete during the day.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes and incomplete thoughts. Try to form complete sentences and explain your ideas clearly. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas logically. Avoid filler words and focus on giving specific reasons.

例: Some people do not like making lists because they prefer to remember their tasks mentally or they plan their day the night before, so they feel a list is unnecessary.

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words like 'because' and 'although'. Avoid incomplete sentences and be specific about your preference.

例: I usually prefer to make my lists on paper in a diary that I keep in my purse because I find it quicker to write things down than using my phone, although using a phone can also save time.

× As a divorce me to the particular things which I have to get an in this way.

✓ As a reminder to the particular things which I have to get, and in this way,

The phrase 'As a divorce me' is incorrect and seems to be a mishearing or typo. The intended phrase is likely 'As a reminder'. Using correct pronouns and phrases is essential for clarity.

× Mostly people doesn't like to create a task perform list so that as it say.

✓ Mostly people don't like to create a task performance list so that, as it is said,

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Also, 'task perform list' is awkward; 'task performance list' or 'to-do list' is better. Subject-verb agreement is important for grammatical correctness.

× As it saves up my time and it keeps me motivated to what all tasks I have to perform throughout the day.

✓ As it saves my time and keeps me motivated about all the tasks I have to perform throughout the day.

The phrase 'saves up my time' is incorrect; 'saves my time' is correct. Also, 'motivated to what all tasks' is awkward; 'motivated about all the tasks' is better. Proper pronoun and preposition usage improves clarity.

× Whenever have to work on something.

✓ Whenever I have to work on something.

The subject 'I' is missing before 'have to work'. Every sentence requires a subject for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Anne. Mostly people doesn't like to create a task perform list so that as it say.

✓ And mostly people don't like to create a task performance list so that, as it is said,

The word 'Anne' seems to be a mishearing of 'And'. Also, 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Correct subject-verb agreement and conjunction usage are necessary.

× Usually I prefer to maintain it on a diary which I had kept in my purse.

✓ Usually I prefer to maintain it in a diary which I keep in my purse.

The correct preposition with 'diary' is 'in', not 'on'. Also, 'had kept' suggests past perfect tense which is not appropriate here; 'keep' is better for present habitual action.

× which I had kept in my purse.

✓ which I keep in my purse.

The past perfect tense 'had kept' is incorrect here because the action is habitual and ongoing. Present simple tense 'keep' is appropriate.

× Though it saves times as well, but. Yeah.

✓ Though it saves time as well, yes.

The phrase 'saves times' is incorrect; 'saves time' is correct. Also, 'though' and 'but' together is redundant; use one. The sentence should be concise and clear.