List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 문장을 간결하고 자연스럽게 구성하며, 질문에 직접적으로 답하는 문장으로 시작하세요. 또한, 구체적인 이유나 예시를 덧붙여 답변을 풍부하게 만드세요.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. This helps me remember all the items I need and saves time while shopping.

提案: 답변이 너무 짧고 의미 전달이 불분명합니다. 질문에 대해 직접적으로 답하고, 리스트를 사용하는 이유나 효과에 대해 구체적으로 설명하세요.

例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work every day. It helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important tasks.

提案: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 질문에 맞게 일반적인 이유를 명확하고 자연스럽게 설명하세요. 구체적인 이유와 예시를 포함하면 좋습니다.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory or feel that lists are unnecessary. They might find lists restrictive or time-consuming.

× 'Cause that I usually make the list. And at the time said. I found this one I go. Grocery shopping. Some items what I need.

✓ Because I usually make a list. At that time, I found this one when I go grocery shopping. Some items that I need.

The original sentence has fragmented and incomplete structures, making it difficult to understand. The correction combines fragments into complete sentences and uses appropriate conjunctions and relative pronouns to clarify meaning.

× Save it.

✓ I save it.

The original sentence lacks a subject, making it incomplete. Adding the subject 'I' completes the sentence and clarifies who performs the action.

× Indian people. Her two memory. Fair minded. Because they think. Right.

✓ Indian people have good memory and are fair-minded because they think carefully.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper structure. Combining them into a complete sentence with subject, verb, and object improves clarity and grammatical correctness.